- •Structure and presentation
- •1.1.1 Sender's address
- •Inside (or receiver's) address
- •1 Surname known
- •2 Title known
- •3 Department known
- •4 Company only
- •Style and punctuation of addresses
- •Denmark
- •The body of the letter
- •Complimentary closes
- •Signatures
- •Letterheads
- •2 Board of Directors
- •3 Addresses
- •4 Registered number
- •References
- •Company position
- •Enclosures
- •Layout 3
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •2 Content and style
- •Too long
- •Too short
- •The right length
- •A warning
- •Order and sequence
- •Unclear sequence
- •Clear sequence
- •Planning your letter
- •Arrand, and latest designs
- •First paragraph
- •Middle paragraphs
- •Final paragraph
- •Style and language
- •Courtesy
- •Idioms and colloquial language
- •Clarity
- •Abbreviations
- •Figures
- •Prepositions
- •Accuracy
- •Titles, names, and addresses
- •References
- •Enclosures
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •2 Content and style
- •Too long
- •Too short
- •The right length
- •A warning
- •Order and sequence
- •Unclear sequence
- •Clear sequence
- •Planning your letter
- •Arrand, and latest designs
- •First paragraph
- •Middle paragraphs
- •Final paragraph
- •Style and language
- •Courtesy
- •Idioms and colloquial language
- •Clarity
- •Abbreviations
- •Figures
- •Prepositions
- •Accuracy
- •Titles, names, and addresses
- •References
- •Enclosures
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •3 Enquiries
- •Methods of enquiry
- •Writing letters of enquiry
- •Opening
- •Asking for catalogues, price-lists, prospectuses
- •Asking for details
- •Asking for samples, patterns, demonstrations
- •Suggesting terms, methods of payment, discounts
- •Asking for goods on approval or on sale or return
- •Asking for an estimate or tender
- •Closing
- •Specimen letters
- •Short enquiries
- •Disc sa
- •Reply to an advertisement
- •Enquiry from a buying agent
- •Enquiry from a retailer to a foreign manufacturer
- •Questions
- •Request for goods on approval
- •Questions
- •Jean Landman
- •Request for an estimate
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •4 Replies and quotations
- •Replying to letters of enquiry
- •Opening
- •Confirming that you can help
- •'Selling' your product
- •Suggesting alternatives
- •Referring the customer elsewhere
- •Catalogues, price-lists, prospectuses, samples
- •Demonstrations, representatives, showroom visits
- •Closing
- •Quotations
- •Transport and insurance costs
- •Discounts
- •Methods of payment
- •Quoting delivery
- •Fixed terms and negotiable terms
- •Giving an estimate
- •Specimen letters
- •R. G. Electronics ag
- •D&sCharcotS.A.R.L
- •Goods on approval
- •Questions
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •5 Orders
- •Placing an order
- •Opening
- •Payment
- •Discounts
- •Delivery
- •Methods of delivery
- •Acknowledging an order
- •Advice of despatch
- •Specimen letters and forms
- •Placing an order: covering letter
- •Questions
- •Attn. Mr d. Causio
- •Order form
- •Questions
- •Acknowledgement of order
- •Advice of despatch
- •Placing an order
- •Questions
- •Advice of despatch
- •Questions
- •Advice note
- •Delays in delivery
- •Refusing an order
- •Out of stock
- •Bad reputation
- •Unfavourable terms
- •Size of order
- •Panton Works, Hounslow, Middlesex, tw6 2bq
- •Questions
- •Refusing an order Questions
- •Sp Wholesalers plc
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Invoices and statements
- •Invoices
- •International Giro
- •International Money Orders
- •International bankers draft
- •Invoice
- •6.3.2 Invoice
- •Ingenieros Industriales sa
- •6.6.7 Second request
- •Unjustified complaints
- •7.3.6 Closing
- •Specimen letters
- •E. F. Baden ag
- •7.6.2 Credit note
- •8 Credit
- •1 Reputation
- •2 Long-term trading association
- •3 References
- •8.4.2 Refusing credit
- •8.4.3 Negotiating
- •21 Mead Road, Swansea, Glamorgan 3st1dr
- •8.8.2 Referee's reply
- •Via di Pietra Papa, 00146 Roma
- •31 Goodge Street, London ec49 4ee
- •21 Mead Road, Swansea, Glamorgan 3st1dr
- •International banking
- •New zealand bank
- •Telephone: 448135/6/7/8
- •International crafts ltd.
- •Telephone: 081 834 2179, 081 834 2710 Cable: intercra Telex: 315620 Fax:081-8344431
- •Dock 23, Mainway, Hong Kong Telephone: 385162 Telex: 349512 Fax: 662553 Cable: lebats
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •10 Agents and agencies
- •Types of agencies
- •Brokers
- •Finding an agent
- •Offering an agency
- •Commission
- •Asking for an agency
- •British crystal Ltd
- •Al Manni Way, Riyadh
- •Directors: m. Allison, b. Locke
- •International Trading Co. Ltd.
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •11 Transportation and shipping
- •Road, rail, and air
- •Specimen letters
- •Air Waybill
- •Shipping
- •Specimen letters
- •Dock 23, Mainway, Hong Kong
- •Bill of lading
- •Instruction to a forwarding agent
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •International Shippers Ltd.
- •City House, City Road, London ec2 1 pc
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •President: j.R, Mason d.F.A. Directors: p. Hartley Snr., a. Hartley Jnr
- •618 West and Vine Street, Chicago, Illinois Telephone: 216818532 Telex: 677312 Fax: 216 349076
- •President: j.R, Mason d.F.A. Directors: p. Hartley Snr., a. Hartley Jnr
- •618 West and Vine Street, Chicago, Illinois Telephone: 216818532 Telex: 677312 Fax: 216 349076
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •Container services
- •International Shippers Ltd.
- •City House, City Road, London ec2 1 pc
- •Chartering ships
- •Chairman: b. Eltham Directors: d.E.R. Machin. O.M. Crewit Furnace House, Granville Road, Sheffield s2 2rl
- •Vat No: 31 4287160 Telex: 813297 unestg
- •International Containers Ltd. Chairman r.L Nathan acwa Directors t.N. Frost, l.S. Newcombe Buxton House, Mableton Place, London wc1h 9bh
- •Certificate of origin
- •Telephone: 071 742 8315 Telex: 331497 longra g Fax: 071 7423319
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •12 Insurance
- •Insurance procedures
- •Fire and accident insurance
- •Head Office, Bruce House, Bruce Street, Aberdeen ab9 1fr
- •Specimen letters
- •Head Office, Bruce House, Bruce Street, Aberdeen ab9 1fr
- •Marine insurance
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •Worldwide Insurance Ltd. 15 May 20—
- •Rejection of claim
- •Words to remember
- •13 Electronic correspondence
- •Fax transmission
- •Perfect Office Suppliers Limited Canal Street, Manchester m14 2kq Fax transmission
- •Specimen email message
- •Telegrams and cables
- •Abbreviations
- •Operating the telex
- •Instruction to stockbroker
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Reservations
- •Appointments
- •Hospitality
- •Special occasions
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •15 In company communications
- •Memorandum
- •Visit of a customer
- •Visit of a customer
- •Retirement of Managing Director
- •Memorandum l Franksen plc Prince of Wales Road, Sheffield s9 4ex
- •Redundancies
- •Reports
- •Specimen reports
- •Memorandum
- •Finance
- •Conclusions
- •Agency report
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Advertisements
- •Applying for a position
- •Curriculum vitae
- •Furstenweg 110
- •Specimen letters
- •Questions
- •Invitation for an interview
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Making a decision
- •Openings
- •Accepting a position
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Advertisements
- •Applying for a position
- •Curriculum vitae
- •Furstenweg 110
- •Specimen letters
- •Questions
- •Invitation for an interview
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Making a decision
- •Openings
- •Accepting a position
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
Specimen letters
11.2.1
Request for a quotation for delivery by road
In this letter the furniture manufacturer we met in earlier units, Homemakers Ltd., is writing to a road haulage firm asking them for an estimate to deliver furniture to his customer, Mr Hughes; he describes the packing (note that size rather than weight will be the main concern of the carrier in this case), states the value of the consignment, and mentions a delivery time.
11.2.2
Quotation for delivery by road
In the reply to Mr Cliff's letter, note how the writer refers to the consignment note as a 'receipt'. He also quotes for 'picking up and delivering' the consignment; carriers may quote for delivery, as here, or on a time basis, i.e. how long it will take to load or unload the lorry or van.
Reg. No: 31883512 VAT No: 96 4218792
CARTIERS Ltd.
516-9 Cathays Park, Cardiff CF1 9UJ
Directors: P.P. Barry, T. Griffiths AC.A
Telephone: (0222) 821597/8/9 Telex 421639 CARTEL G Fax-(0222) 498315
12 November 19—
Mr R. Cliff Homemakers Ltd. 54-59 Riverside Cardiff CF1 1JW
Dear Mr Cliff,
In reply to your letter of 10 November, we can quote £72.20 for picking up and delivering your consignment from your address to the consignee's premises. This includes loading and unloading, plus insurance.
If you fill out the Despatch Note enclosed, and let us know two days before you want the delivery made, our driver will hand you a receipt when he calls to collect the consignment.
Yours sincerely,
H. Weldon
Supervisor
Enc.
HOMEMAKERS Ltd.
54-59 Riverside, Cardiff CF1 1JW
Telephone: (0222) 49721 Registered №.C135162
Telex: 38217
Mr R. Hughes 13 November 20—
R. Hughes & Son. Ltd.
21 Mead Road
Swansea
Glamorgan 3ST1DR
Dear Mr Hughes,
Order No. B1517
As our own driver is ill, I have arranged for Cartiers Ltd. to deliver the above order on Wednesday 18 November. Before signing the delivery note, could you please check that the consignment is complete and undamaged?
I have enclosed the invoice, No. DM2S61, and will add it to your monthly statement as usual.
Yours sincerely,
R. Cliff
Enc. Invoice No. DM2561
11.2.3
Advice of delivery
Homemakers Ltd. now advise their customer.
11.2.4
Complaint of damage in delivery by rail
Delivery notes are sent with consignments and can be signed stating that the 'contents have been examined'; which means the consignee has seen the goods and is accepting them in good condition, or 'contents not examined' as a precaution against receiving damaged goods. In this letter, the goods were sent by road, at the consignee's request, and were received damaged. Disc S.A., the customer, is writing to their supplier complaining about the consignment.
Questions
1. How does M.Gerard describe the damage?
2. Were all the boxes damaged?
3. Is there any chance of selling the goods?
4. Is M.Gerard going to return the consignment?
Disc SA
251 rue des Roimonieres F-86000 Poitiers Cedex
Tel: (33! 9968J031 Telecopie: (33! W2163
Ret: PG/A1 15 August 20—
The Sales Director
R.G. Electronics AG
Havmart 601
D-5000 Koln 1
Dear Mr Gerlach,
Consignment Note 671342 158
Yesterday we received the above consignment to our order, No. T1953, but found on opening boxes 4, 5, and 6 that the CDs and tapes in them were damaged.
Most of the CDs were either split or warped, in boxes 4 and 5, and the majority of cassette cases in box 6 were smashed, with tape spilling out of the cassettes themselves.
The goods cannot be retailed even at a discount and we would like to know whether you want us to return them, or hold them for inspection.
Yours sincerely,
P. Gerard
11.2.5
Reply to complaint of damage
Questions
1. What does Herr Gerlach quote in the letter?
2. Why will he not take responsibility for the consignment?
3. Why is he sure the goods were in perfect condition when they left his company?
4. What help does he offer M. Gerard?
5. Which words in the letter correspond to the following: goods; send; transported; make up for loss?
R. G. Electronics AG
Havmart 601
D-5000 Koln 1
Tel: (221)32 42 98
Fax:(221)836125
Telex: 6153291 Your Ref: JA/MR
P. Gerard 20 August 20-
Disc S.A.
251 rue des Raimomeres
F-86000 Poitiers Cedex
Dear Mr Gerard,
I was sorry to hear about the damage to part of the consignment (No. Т1953) that we sent you last week.
I have checked with our despatch department and they tell me that the goods left here in perfect condition. There should be our checker's mark on the side of each box, which is a blue label with a packer's number and date on it.
As you made the arrangements for delivery, I am afraid we cannot help you. However, I suggest you write to Gebruder Bauer Spedition and if the goods were being carried at 'carrier's risk' I am sure they will consider compensation.
I have enclosed a copy of their receipt from their goods depot at Koln, and you can have any other documents that we can supply to help you with your claim.
Yours sincerely,
P. Gerard
State Director
Enc.
11.2.6
Complaint to the carrier
Disc S.A. write to the railway company. On receipt of this letter, the railway company will inspect the goods and decide whether the damage was due to negligence. If it was, the customer will receive compensation.
Questions
1. What did the consignment consist of?
2. What sort of condition were the goods in when delivered to the sender's station?
3. How does M. Gerard think the damage was caused?
4. What compensation is M. Gerard asking for?
5. Why does M. Gerard feel he has the right to claim compensation?
6. What is being sent with the letter?
7. Which words used in the letter correspond to the following: brought; place of business; left; believe; breakable; retain?
Disc SA
251 rue des Roimonieres F-86000 Poitiers Cedex
Tel: (33! 9968J031 Telecopie: (33! W2163
Ret: PG/A1 14 September 20—
Gebruder Bauer Spedition
Mamzerstrasse, 201-7
D-5000 Koln 1
Dear Sirs,
Consignment Note 671342 158
The above consignment was delivered to our premises, at the above address, on September 6. It consisted of eight boxes of records and cassettes, three of which were badly damaged.
We have contacted our suppliers, and they inform us that when the goods were deposited at your depot, they were in perfect condition. Therefore we assume that damage occurred while the consignment was in your care.
The boxes were marked FRAGILE and KEEP AWAY FROM HEAT, but because of the nature of the damage to the goods (CDs warped, cassette cases split), the consignment appears to have been roughly handled and left near a heater.
We estimate the loss on invoice value to be F 6,720, and as the goods were sent 'carrier's risk' we are claiming compensation for that amount.
You will find a copy of the consignment note and invoice enclosed, and we will hold the boxes for your inspection.
Yours faithfully,
BRITISH CRYSTAL Ltd.
Glazier House, Green Lane, Derby DEI 1RT
Telephone 0332 45790 Telex: 901614 Fox: 0332 51977
Cargo Manager 15 June 20—
Universal Airways Ltd.
Palace Road
London SW1
Dear Sir,
We would like to send from Heathrow to Riyadh, Saudi Arabia, twelve boxes of assorted glassware, to be delivered within the next fortnight.
Each box weighs 40 kilos, and measures 0.51 cubic metres. Could you please quote charges for shipment and insurance?
Yours faithfully,
N.Jay
Director
11.2.7
Request for a quotation for delivery by air
British Crystal Ltd. write to an airline to find out how much it will cost to send glassware to their agents in Saudi Arabia. (See 10.5.1 /2/3 for original correspondence.)
11.2.8
Quotation for delivery by air
Here is the airline's reply to Mr Jay. We saw before that airlines calculate freight charges on weight or volume; in this case both will have been taken into account. Note also that there are twelve copies of an air waybill: when the document is made out for this shipment, one will go to the airline, one to the consignor, and one to the consignee, each being accepted as originals; the other copies go to customers and handling.
Questions
1. What other charges are there besides the freight charges?
2. Are there daily flights to Saudi Arabia?
3. Why should an invoice be included in the parcel?
4. Who will arrange insurance?
Universal Airways Ltd.
Airline House, Palace Road, London SW1
DirectorsiSir Bernard Hullings, E.M. Merchant FCA, D.L Owen АСА, В. Friens MA
Telephone: 071 6384129 Reg. No: London 281395
Telex: 381215 Cable: UNIWAY VAT No: 85 116259 15
Fax: 071 638 5551
MrN.Jay 18 June 20—
British Crystal Ltd.
Glazier House
Green Lane
Derby DEI 1RT
Dear Mr Jay,
Thank you for your enquiry of 15 June.
We will be able to send your consignment to Riyadh within two days of your delivering it to Heathrow. The cost of freight Heathrow/Riyadh is £3.60 per kilo, plus £1.50 air waybill, and £14.00 customs clearance and handling charges. But you will have to arrange your own insurance.
There are three flights a week from London to Saudi Arabia, Monday, Wednesday, and Saturday.
Please fill in the enclosed Despatch Form and return it to us with the consignment and commercial invoices, one of which should be included in the parcel for customs inspection.
Yours sincerely,
R. Laden
Cargo Manager
Enc.
11.2.9