- •Structure and presentation
- •1.1.1 Sender's address
- •Inside (or receiver's) address
- •1 Surname known
- •2 Title known
- •3 Department known
- •4 Company only
- •Style and punctuation of addresses
- •Denmark
- •The body of the letter
- •Complimentary closes
- •Signatures
- •Letterheads
- •2 Board of Directors
- •3 Addresses
- •4 Registered number
- •References
- •Company position
- •Enclosures
- •Layout 3
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •2 Content and style
- •Too long
- •Too short
- •The right length
- •A warning
- •Order and sequence
- •Unclear sequence
- •Clear sequence
- •Planning your letter
- •Arrand, and latest designs
- •First paragraph
- •Middle paragraphs
- •Final paragraph
- •Style and language
- •Courtesy
- •Idioms and colloquial language
- •Clarity
- •Abbreviations
- •Figures
- •Prepositions
- •Accuracy
- •Titles, names, and addresses
- •References
- •Enclosures
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •2 Content and style
- •Too long
- •Too short
- •The right length
- •A warning
- •Order and sequence
- •Unclear sequence
- •Clear sequence
- •Planning your letter
- •Arrand, and latest designs
- •First paragraph
- •Middle paragraphs
- •Final paragraph
- •Style and language
- •Courtesy
- •Idioms and colloquial language
- •Clarity
- •Abbreviations
- •Figures
- •Prepositions
- •Accuracy
- •Titles, names, and addresses
- •References
- •Enclosures
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •3 Enquiries
- •Methods of enquiry
- •Writing letters of enquiry
- •Opening
- •Asking for catalogues, price-lists, prospectuses
- •Asking for details
- •Asking for samples, patterns, demonstrations
- •Suggesting terms, methods of payment, discounts
- •Asking for goods on approval or on sale or return
- •Asking for an estimate or tender
- •Closing
- •Specimen letters
- •Short enquiries
- •Disc sa
- •Reply to an advertisement
- •Enquiry from a buying agent
- •Enquiry from a retailer to a foreign manufacturer
- •Questions
- •Request for goods on approval
- •Questions
- •Jean Landman
- •Request for an estimate
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •4 Replies and quotations
- •Replying to letters of enquiry
- •Opening
- •Confirming that you can help
- •'Selling' your product
- •Suggesting alternatives
- •Referring the customer elsewhere
- •Catalogues, price-lists, prospectuses, samples
- •Demonstrations, representatives, showroom visits
- •Closing
- •Quotations
- •Transport and insurance costs
- •Discounts
- •Methods of payment
- •Quoting delivery
- •Fixed terms and negotiable terms
- •Giving an estimate
- •Specimen letters
- •R. G. Electronics ag
- •D&sCharcotS.A.R.L
- •Goods on approval
- •Questions
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •5 Orders
- •Placing an order
- •Opening
- •Payment
- •Discounts
- •Delivery
- •Methods of delivery
- •Acknowledging an order
- •Advice of despatch
- •Specimen letters and forms
- •Placing an order: covering letter
- •Questions
- •Attn. Mr d. Causio
- •Order form
- •Questions
- •Acknowledgement of order
- •Advice of despatch
- •Placing an order
- •Questions
- •Advice of despatch
- •Questions
- •Advice note
- •Delays in delivery
- •Refusing an order
- •Out of stock
- •Bad reputation
- •Unfavourable terms
- •Size of order
- •Panton Works, Hounslow, Middlesex, tw6 2bq
- •Questions
- •Refusing an order Questions
- •Sp Wholesalers plc
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Invoices and statements
- •Invoices
- •International Giro
- •International Money Orders
- •International bankers draft
- •Invoice
- •6.3.2 Invoice
- •Ingenieros Industriales sa
- •6.6.7 Second request
- •Unjustified complaints
- •7.3.6 Closing
- •Specimen letters
- •E. F. Baden ag
- •7.6.2 Credit note
- •8 Credit
- •1 Reputation
- •2 Long-term trading association
- •3 References
- •8.4.2 Refusing credit
- •8.4.3 Negotiating
- •21 Mead Road, Swansea, Glamorgan 3st1dr
- •8.8.2 Referee's reply
- •Via di Pietra Papa, 00146 Roma
- •31 Goodge Street, London ec49 4ee
- •21 Mead Road, Swansea, Glamorgan 3st1dr
- •International banking
- •New zealand bank
- •Telephone: 448135/6/7/8
- •International crafts ltd.
- •Telephone: 081 834 2179, 081 834 2710 Cable: intercra Telex: 315620 Fax:081-8344431
- •Dock 23, Mainway, Hong Kong Telephone: 385162 Telex: 349512 Fax: 662553 Cable: lebats
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •10 Agents and agencies
- •Types of agencies
- •Brokers
- •Finding an agent
- •Offering an agency
- •Commission
- •Asking for an agency
- •British crystal Ltd
- •Al Manni Way, Riyadh
- •Directors: m. Allison, b. Locke
- •International Trading Co. Ltd.
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •11 Transportation and shipping
- •Road, rail, and air
- •Specimen letters
- •Air Waybill
- •Shipping
- •Specimen letters
- •Dock 23, Mainway, Hong Kong
- •Bill of lading
- •Instruction to a forwarding agent
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •International Shippers Ltd.
- •City House, City Road, London ec2 1 pc
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •President: j.R, Mason d.F.A. Directors: p. Hartley Snr., a. Hartley Jnr
- •618 West and Vine Street, Chicago, Illinois Telephone: 216818532 Telex: 677312 Fax: 216 349076
- •President: j.R, Mason d.F.A. Directors: p. Hartley Snr., a. Hartley Jnr
- •618 West and Vine Street, Chicago, Illinois Telephone: 216818532 Telex: 677312 Fax: 216 349076
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •Container services
- •International Shippers Ltd.
- •City House, City Road, London ec2 1 pc
- •Chartering ships
- •Chairman: b. Eltham Directors: d.E.R. Machin. O.M. Crewit Furnace House, Granville Road, Sheffield s2 2rl
- •Vat No: 31 4287160 Telex: 813297 unestg
- •International Containers Ltd. Chairman r.L Nathan acwa Directors t.N. Frost, l.S. Newcombe Buxton House, Mableton Place, London wc1h 9bh
- •Certificate of origin
- •Telephone: 071 742 8315 Telex: 331497 longra g Fax: 071 7423319
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •12 Insurance
- •Insurance procedures
- •Fire and accident insurance
- •Head Office, Bruce House, Bruce Street, Aberdeen ab9 1fr
- •Specimen letters
- •Head Office, Bruce House, Bruce Street, Aberdeen ab9 1fr
- •Marine insurance
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •Worldwide Insurance Ltd. 15 May 20—
- •Rejection of claim
- •Words to remember
- •13 Electronic correspondence
- •Fax transmission
- •Perfect Office Suppliers Limited Canal Street, Manchester m14 2kq Fax transmission
- •Specimen email message
- •Telegrams and cables
- •Abbreviations
- •Operating the telex
- •Instruction to stockbroker
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Reservations
- •Appointments
- •Hospitality
- •Special occasions
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •15 In company communications
- •Memorandum
- •Visit of a customer
- •Visit of a customer
- •Retirement of Managing Director
- •Memorandum l Franksen plc Prince of Wales Road, Sheffield s9 4ex
- •Redundancies
- •Reports
- •Specimen reports
- •Memorandum
- •Finance
- •Conclusions
- •Agency report
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Advertisements
- •Applying for a position
- •Curriculum vitae
- •Furstenweg 110
- •Specimen letters
- •Questions
- •Invitation for an interview
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Making a decision
- •Openings
- •Accepting a position
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Advertisements
- •Applying for a position
- •Curriculum vitae
- •Furstenweg 110
- •Specimen letters
- •Questions
- •Invitation for an interview
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Making a decision
- •Openings
- •Accepting a position
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
Head Office, Bruce House, Bruce Street, Aberdeen ab9 1fr
Registered in Scotland No. 166051 Telephone: 022441615
VAT No. 54901013 Fax: 0224 62219
Telex: 247182
Your ref: Ourref: N3162-1 Date: 6 April 20—
Westway Insurance Co. Ltd.
Society House
Ellison Place
Newcastle-upon-Tyne NE1 8ST
Dear Sirs,
We would like to know if you could offer a comprehensive insurance policy covering us against fire, flood, accident, industrial injury, and theft.
We are a large warehouse selling furnishings to the retail trade, and employing a staff of thirty. The building we occupy belongs to us and is valued, along with the fixtures and fittings, at £250,000 and at any one time there might be stock worth £70,000 on the premises.
When calculating the premium, would you please take the following into consideration:
There are no open fires on the premises as central heating is used, and we have a fully operational sprinkler system which is serviced regularly. There are also numerous fire extinguishers strategically placed throughout, and fire exits on every floor.
The only danger from flood would be from burst pipes, as we are some distance from the river.
Since we began trading six years ago we have never had to claim for industrial injury, and damage to stock has been minimal. Finally, pilferage, which is common in warehouses, has only cost us £400 per annum on average.
Our present policy runs out at the end of this month, so we would require cover as from 1 May, and we would point out that we are changing insurance companies because of the increased rates that our former insurers are charging. So a competitive quotation would be appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Daracott
12.3
Specimen letters
12.3.1
Request for comprehensive insurance
United Warehouses want to change their insurance company. In this letter they ask Westway Insurance for a quotation.
Questions
1. What sort of policy is United Warehouses asking for?
2. How many people do they employ?
3. What precautions have they taken against fire?
4. Is petty theft a problem for them?
5. Why are they changing their insurers?
6. Which words in the letter correspond to the following: full cover against all contingencies; store; place of work; looked after; checked; inundation; small; stealing a few things; insurance protection'?
В. Daracott
United Warehouses Ltd.
12.3.2
Quotation for comprehensive insurance
In this reply to United Warehouses' request, notice that there are three policies available offering cover under different conditions, but the writer draws attention to one of them, and offers to send an agent to explain the details. The rate of 65p% is mentioned for indemnification, i.e. to cover the client for compensation based on the market values of stock and machinery.
Westway Insurance Co. Ltd.
Chairman: Sir David Wedge Directors: M. Orwell I.P.A., C.R. Archer F.I.S., D.F. Clements
Regional Office, Society House. Ellison Place, Newcastle-upon-Tyne NE1 8ST
Reg. No: England 544712 Telephone: (0632) 326115 Ext: 417
Fax:(0632)501116 VAT No. 61 576192
Telex: 890410
Yourref: N3162-1 Ourref: 1/34/91675 Date: 9 April 20—
Mr B. Daracott
United Warehouses Ltd.
Bruce House
Bruce Street
Aberdeen AB91FR
Dear Mr Daracott,
Thank you very much for your letter of 6 April in which you enquired about our insurance cover.
I have enclosed leaflets explaining our three fully-comprehensive industrial policies which offer the sort of cover you require, and I think that policy A351 would probably suit you best as it offers the widest protection at 65p% with full indemnification.
If you wish, I could get one of our agents to call on you to discuss any details that might not be clear, or, if you are satisfied with the terms, please complete the enclosed proposal form and return it to us with your cheque for £195.00 and we will effect insurance as from 1 May this year.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
N. Sagum
District Manager
Westway Insurance Co. Ltd.
Chairman: Sir David Wedge Directors: M. Orwell I.P.A., C.R. Archer F.I.S., D.F. Clements
Regional Office, Society House. Ellison Place, Newcastle-upon-Tyne NE1 8ST
Reg. No: England 544712 Telephone: (0632) 326115 Ext: 417
Fax:(0632)501116 VAT No. 61 576192
Telex: 890410
Yourref: N3162-1 Ourref: 1/34/91675 Date: 17 August 20—
Mr E. Brockway
International Credit Cards PLC
1 17-120 Hardman Road
Sheffield S2 2RL
Dear Mr Brockway,
Thank you for your letter of August 15, in which you asked about bonding your employee, Mr Alfred Cade.
We have checked the references you gave us and he appears to have an excellent record. Therefore, we will cover Mr Cade for £30,000 on the understanding that he will only handle credit cards and customers accounts. If, however, he is going to deal with cash, would you please inform us at once?
Insurance will be effected as soon as we receive the enclosed proposal form, completed by you.
Yours sincerely,
N. Sagum
District Manager
Enc. Proposal form
12.3.5
Quotation for bonding an employee
International Credit Cards have asked if Westway would bond one of their employees, i.e. insure him against defrauding the company. Here is the reply.
12.3.6
Claim for fire damage
Here is a claim for fire damage from United Warehouses (see 12.3.1-2 for initial correspondence).
United Warehouses Ltd.
Chairman: B.R. MacDonald A.C.A. Directors: M.S. Souness, A. Gemill M.Sc.,