
- •Structure and presentation
- •1.1.1 Sender's address
- •Inside (or receiver's) address
- •1 Surname known
- •2 Title known
- •3 Department known
- •4 Company only
- •Style and punctuation of addresses
- •Denmark
- •The body of the letter
- •Complimentary closes
- •Signatures
- •Letterheads
- •2 Board of Directors
- •3 Addresses
- •4 Registered number
- •References
- •Company position
- •Enclosures
- •Layout 3
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •2 Content and style
- •Too long
- •Too short
- •The right length
- •A warning
- •Order and sequence
- •Unclear sequence
- •Clear sequence
- •Planning your letter
- •Arrand, and latest designs
- •First paragraph
- •Middle paragraphs
- •Final paragraph
- •Style and language
- •Courtesy
- •Idioms and colloquial language
- •Clarity
- •Abbreviations
- •Figures
- •Prepositions
- •Accuracy
- •Titles, names, and addresses
- •References
- •Enclosures
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •2 Content and style
- •Too long
- •Too short
- •The right length
- •A warning
- •Order and sequence
- •Unclear sequence
- •Clear sequence
- •Planning your letter
- •Arrand, and latest designs
- •First paragraph
- •Middle paragraphs
- •Final paragraph
- •Style and language
- •Courtesy
- •Idioms and colloquial language
- •Clarity
- •Abbreviations
- •Figures
- •Prepositions
- •Accuracy
- •Titles, names, and addresses
- •References
- •Enclosures
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •3 Enquiries
- •Methods of enquiry
- •Writing letters of enquiry
- •Opening
- •Asking for catalogues, price-lists, prospectuses
- •Asking for details
- •Asking for samples, patterns, demonstrations
- •Suggesting terms, methods of payment, discounts
- •Asking for goods on approval or on sale or return
- •Asking for an estimate or tender
- •Closing
- •Specimen letters
- •Short enquiries
- •Disc sa
- •Reply to an advertisement
- •Enquiry from a buying agent
- •Enquiry from a retailer to a foreign manufacturer
- •Questions
- •Request for goods on approval
- •Questions
- •Jean Landman
- •Request for an estimate
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •4 Replies and quotations
- •Replying to letters of enquiry
- •Opening
- •Confirming that you can help
- •'Selling' your product
- •Suggesting alternatives
- •Referring the customer elsewhere
- •Catalogues, price-lists, prospectuses, samples
- •Demonstrations, representatives, showroom visits
- •Closing
- •Quotations
- •Transport and insurance costs
- •Discounts
- •Methods of payment
- •Quoting delivery
- •Fixed terms and negotiable terms
- •Giving an estimate
- •Specimen letters
- •R. G. Electronics ag
- •D&sCharcotS.A.R.L
- •Goods on approval
- •Questions
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •5 Orders
- •Placing an order
- •Opening
- •Payment
- •Discounts
- •Delivery
- •Methods of delivery
- •Acknowledging an order
- •Advice of despatch
- •Specimen letters and forms
- •Placing an order: covering letter
- •Questions
- •Attn. Mr d. Causio
- •Order form
- •Questions
- •Acknowledgement of order
- •Advice of despatch
- •Placing an order
- •Questions
- •Advice of despatch
- •Questions
- •Advice note
- •Delays in delivery
- •Refusing an order
- •Out of stock
- •Bad reputation
- •Unfavourable terms
- •Size of order
- •Panton Works, Hounslow, Middlesex, tw6 2bq
- •Questions
- •Refusing an order Questions
- •Sp Wholesalers plc
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Invoices and statements
- •Invoices
- •International Giro
- •International Money Orders
- •International bankers draft
- •Invoice
- •6.3.2 Invoice
- •Ingenieros Industriales sa
- •6.6.7 Second request
- •Unjustified complaints
- •7.3.6 Closing
- •Specimen letters
- •E. F. Baden ag
- •7.6.2 Credit note
- •8 Credit
- •1 Reputation
- •2 Long-term trading association
- •3 References
- •8.4.2 Refusing credit
- •8.4.3 Negotiating
- •21 Mead Road, Swansea, Glamorgan 3st1dr
- •8.8.2 Referee's reply
- •Via di Pietra Papa, 00146 Roma
- •31 Goodge Street, London ec49 4ee
- •21 Mead Road, Swansea, Glamorgan 3st1dr
- •International banking
- •New zealand bank
- •Telephone: 448135/6/7/8
- •International crafts ltd.
- •Telephone: 081 834 2179, 081 834 2710 Cable: intercra Telex: 315620 Fax:081-8344431
- •Dock 23, Mainway, Hong Kong Telephone: 385162 Telex: 349512 Fax: 662553 Cable: lebats
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •10 Agents and agencies
- •Types of agencies
- •Brokers
- •Finding an agent
- •Offering an agency
- •Commission
- •Asking for an agency
- •British crystal Ltd
- •Al Manni Way, Riyadh
- •Directors: m. Allison, b. Locke
- •International Trading Co. Ltd.
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •11 Transportation and shipping
- •Road, rail, and air
- •Specimen letters
- •Air Waybill
- •Shipping
- •Specimen letters
- •Dock 23, Mainway, Hong Kong
- •Bill of lading
- •Instruction to a forwarding agent
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •International Shippers Ltd.
- •City House, City Road, London ec2 1 pc
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •President: j.R, Mason d.F.A. Directors: p. Hartley Snr., a. Hartley Jnr
- •618 West and Vine Street, Chicago, Illinois Telephone: 216818532 Telex: 677312 Fax: 216 349076
- •President: j.R, Mason d.F.A. Directors: p. Hartley Snr., a. Hartley Jnr
- •618 West and Vine Street, Chicago, Illinois Telephone: 216818532 Telex: 677312 Fax: 216 349076
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •Container services
- •International Shippers Ltd.
- •City House, City Road, London ec2 1 pc
- •Chartering ships
- •Chairman: b. Eltham Directors: d.E.R. Machin. O.M. Crewit Furnace House, Granville Road, Sheffield s2 2rl
- •Vat No: 31 4287160 Telex: 813297 unestg
- •International Containers Ltd. Chairman r.L Nathan acwa Directors t.N. Frost, l.S. Newcombe Buxton House, Mableton Place, London wc1h 9bh
- •Certificate of origin
- •Telephone: 071 742 8315 Telex: 331497 longra g Fax: 071 7423319
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •12 Insurance
- •Insurance procedures
- •Fire and accident insurance
- •Head Office, Bruce House, Bruce Street, Aberdeen ab9 1fr
- •Specimen letters
- •Head Office, Bruce House, Bruce Street, Aberdeen ab9 1fr
- •Marine insurance
- •South Bank House, Borough Road, London se1 oaa
- •Worldwide Insurance Ltd. 15 May 20—
- •Rejection of claim
- •Words to remember
- •13 Electronic correspondence
- •Fax transmission
- •Perfect Office Suppliers Limited Canal Street, Manchester m14 2kq Fax transmission
- •Specimen email message
- •Telegrams and cables
- •Abbreviations
- •Operating the telex
- •Instruction to stockbroker
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Reservations
- •Appointments
- •Hospitality
- •Special occasions
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •15 In company communications
- •Memorandum
- •Visit of a customer
- •Visit of a customer
- •Retirement of Managing Director
- •Memorandum l Franksen plc Prince of Wales Road, Sheffield s9 4ex
- •Redundancies
- •Reports
- •Specimen reports
- •Memorandum
- •Finance
- •Conclusions
- •Agency report
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Advertisements
- •Applying for a position
- •Curriculum vitae
- •Furstenweg 110
- •Specimen letters
- •Questions
- •Invitation for an interview
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Making a decision
- •Openings
- •Accepting a position
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
- •Advertisements
- •Applying for a position
- •Curriculum vitae
- •Furstenweg 110
- •Specimen letters
- •Questions
- •Invitation for an interview
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Making a decision
- •Openings
- •Accepting a position
- •International Computing Services pic
- •Points to remember
- •Words to remember
Acknowledgement of order
Satex S.p.A. will now prepare Mr Crane's order, but in the meantime let him know that the order has been received.
Satex S.p.A.
Via di Pietra Papa, 00146 Roma
Telctono: Roma 769910
Telefax: (06) 681 5473
Telex: 285136
Mr L. Crane, Chief Buyer vs.rif.: Order DR4316
F, Lynch & Co. Ltd. Ns.rif.: D/1140
Nesson House 13 March 20—
Newell Street
Birmingham B3 3EL
UNITED KINGDOM
Dear Mr Crane,
Thank you for your order (No. DR4316) which we are now making up. We have all the items in stock and will be advising you in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
D. Causio
Satex S.p.A.
Via di Pietra Papa, 00146 Roma
Telctono: Roma 769910
Telefax: (06) 681 5473
Telex: 285136
Mr L. Crane, Chief Buyer vs.rif.: Order DR4316
F, Lynch & Co. Ltd. Ns.rif.: D/1141
Nesson House 29 March 20—
Newell Street
Birmingham B3 3EL
UNITED KINGDOM
Dear Mr Crane,
We would like to advise you that your order has been shipped on the SS Marconissa and should reach you within the next ten days. Meanwhile our bank has forwarded the relevant documents and sight draft for £1,662,60 to the Northminster Bank (City Branch) Birmingham
We are sure you will be pleased with the consignment and look forward to your next order.
Yours sincerely,
D, Causio
5.4.4
Advice of despatch
This letter confirms that Satex S.p.A. have sent the order. When he receives this letter, Mr Crane will go to the Northminster Bank, where he will be asked to accept a sight draft, i.e. pay a bill of exchange immediately. After he has paid this, he will be handed the shipping documents (bill of lading, insurance certificate, and commercial invoice) so that he can collect the goods. Remember, this was a c.i.f. transaction where the supplier paid cost, insurance, and freight, and on a documents against acceptance basis, i.e. once the bill of exchange has been accepted, the documents would be handed over.
5.4.5
Placing an order
This letter and the next one follow on from the correspondence at 3.3.3 and 4.3.3. There are three parties involved: the manufacturers, Glaston Potteries; the buying agents, Sanders and Lowe; and their principals in Canada, MacKenzie Bros. Here, Mrs Lowe is writing on behalf of her principals and forwarding their order. Notice the instructions she gives and notice that she has already phoned the manufacturer to agree terms of payment which were not mentioned in the manufacturer's letter at 4.3.3.
Questions
1 Sanders & Lowe have completed their job, which was to find a supplier. So who must Glaston Potteries write to now?
2 What advice has been given on packing?
3 What method of payment has been arranged?
4 Will substitutes be acceptable if Glaston Potteries are out of stock of any items?
5 Why should there be no problem for Glaston Potteries to deliver within four weeks?
6 Which words used in the letter correspond to the following: cups, saucers, plates, etc.', boxes', breakables; made; different; stated;
relevant; completed?
Sanders & Lowe Ltd.
Import and Export. (London Office). Planter House, Princes Street, London EC1 7DO Birmingham Office: 28 Bradshaw Street. Birmingham B5 1TO Telephone: 071 V.
Manchester Office: 343 Oxford Street. Manchester M27 2LR Fax: 071 543 1925
Liverpool Office: 54 Bakers Road. Liverpool L3 9HW Telex: 428537
Stockport Office: 5 Island Road. Stockport SM3 12K
Reg No England 155134
Directors: L,W Lowe. D.R, Sanders VAT No 013700121
Your rcf:—— Our ref: 185/MB Date: 2 July 20-
Mr J. Merton
Sales Manager
Glaston Potteries Ltd.
Clayfield
Burnley BB 10 IRQ
Dear Mr Merton,
Please find enclosed an order (R1432) from our principals, MacKenzie Bros. Ltd., 1-5 Whale Drive, Dawson, Ontario, Canada.
They have asked us to instruct you that the 60 sets of crockery ordered should be packed in six crates, ten sets per crate, with each piece individually wrapped, and the crates marked clearly with their name, the words 'fragile', 'crockery', and numbered 1-6.
They have agreed to pay by letter of credit, which we discussed on the phone last week, and they would like delivery before the end of this month, which should be easily effected as there are regular sailings from Liverpool.
If the colours they have chosen are not in stock, they will accept an alternative provided the designs are those stipulated on the order.
Please send any further correspondence relating to shipment or payment direct to MacKenzie Bros. and let us have a copy of the commercial invoice when it is made up.
Yours sincerely,
L.W. Lowe (Mrs)
Enc. Order R1432
GLASTON POTTBRIBS Ltd.
Clayfield, Burnley BB10 IRQ
Tel: 0315 46125 Registered No. 716481
Telex: 8801773 VAT Registered No. 133 5341 08
Fax: 0315 63182
MacKenzie Bros. Ltd. 14 July 20—
1-5 Whale Drive
Daw-son
Ontario
CANADA
Dear Sirs,
Order R1432
The above order has now been completed and sent to Liverpool Docks where it is awaiting loading onto the SS Manitoba which sails for Dawson, Canada on the 16 July and arrives on 30 July.
Once we have the necessary documents we will hand them to Burnley City Bank, your bank's agents here, and they will forward them to the Canadian Union Trust Bank.
We have taken special care to see that the goods have been packed as per your instructions, the six crates being marked with your name, and numbered 1-6. Each crate measures 6ft x 4ft x 3ft and weighs 5 cwt.
We managed to get all items from stock with the exception of Cat. No. G16 which we only had in red. But we included it in the consignment as it had the Willow pattern you asked for.
If there is any further information you require, please contact us. Thank you very much for your order, and we look forward to hearing from you again soon.
Yours faithfully,
J. Merton (Mr)
Sales Manager
5.4.6