- •Introduction
- •1 Business letter writing
- •2The letter heading and the layout
- •2.1. The parts of the letter
- •2.2. Style of american firms
- •3. Structure and presentation
- •1. Read the following statements and decide which are true t and which are false
- •2. Put the verbs in brackets into either the present simple, (e.G. He works), or the present continuous, (e.G. He is working).
- •3. Put the following names and addresses in order.
- •5. Complete the following letter of enquiry with the correct prepositions.
- •Veto Sport ag
- •3.1. Content and Style
- •1. Read this letter from a computer company to a company trainer, and fill in the blanks with the correct verb taken from the list below.
- •2. Put the phrases below in the correct order to form a letter requesting information.
- •3. Rewrite the following request for payment in a more polite form.
- •4. Other methods of communication
- •4.1. Competition
- •Curriculum vitae
- •Interests/hobbies
- •4.2. Forms
- •4.4. Faxes
- •4.5. Notices
- •4.7. Memoranda
- •5 The enquiry
- •Requests for catalogues and price lists
- •General enquiries and replies
- •Enquiries cliches
- •Enquiries
- •1. Fill in the missing words:
- •3. Match these words from Exercise 2 with their definitions
- •4. Rewrite the following questions in a less direct form, beginning with the words given.
- •5. Make words from the jumbled letters and match them with the definitions in the sentences below.
- •6. John Phillips is telling his secretary what to write when she types out the day's letters. Change his instructions into an acceptable form for business correspondence.
- •7. Complete the following letter of enquiry with the correct prepositions.
- •8. Read this reply to a letter of enquiry. Underline the words in the letter which correspond to the words and phrases below.
- •Glaston potteries Ltd
- •Reply to an enquiries (offers)
- •Replies to enquiries cliches
- •Replies and quotations
- •1. Read the following reply to a letter of enquiry. Mr. Fest refers to specific questions asked by Mr Whang. Which of the items below did he request information about?
- •6. Invoices and adjustments
- •Inform the buyer of the amount due.
- •Invoice
- •Invoice
- •Debit and credit notes
- •Varying the terms of payment
- •Useful expressions
- •7. Letters requesting payment tone
- •Late payments
- •Collection letters
- •Second application letters
- •Third application letters
- •Final collection letters
- •Checklist
- •8. Complaints and adjustment
- •Complaints concerning goods
- •Complaints concerning delivery
- •Checklist
- •Useful expressions
- •Complaints and adjustments
- •In the following sentences, the word in italics is not very appropriate for formal correspondence. Choose a more suitable alternative from the list.
- •British Suppliers plc
- •9. Credit and status enquiries
- •Lending restrictions and bad trade
Collection letters
The preliminary steps in debt collection are as follows:
A first end-of-month statement of account.
A second end-of-month statement of account with added comment.
A first letter worded formally.
Second and third letters.
A final letter notifying that legal action will be taken unless the amount is paid within a stipulated period of time
A customer whose account is only slightly overdue would understandably be offended to receive a personal letter concerning this. This is why the first 2 reminders usually take the form of end-of-the-month statements of account. Even where the second of these statements is marked with such comments as 'Second application', 'Account overdue - please pay’ or 'Immediate attention is requested', this is unlikely to give offence.
FIRST APPLICATIONS FOR PAYMENT
It is not wise to write a letter until a customer has been given the opportunity to pay on these impersonal statements. Letters requesting payment of overdue accounts are termed 'collection letters'. They aim to:
persuade the customer to settle the account;
retain custom and goodwill.
It would be easy to give offence so any letters must be written with tact and restraint. It may also be the case that the supplier is at fault, as in the case where a payment received has not been recorded, or goods sent or service given is not satisfactory.
A printed collection letter
A first collection letter may be printed as a 'form letter' as in this example where the individual details arc keyed in appropriately. Alternatively the details may be stored on a word processor so that the letter may be personalised.
Dear Sir / Madam
ACCOUNT NUMBER...
According to our records the above account dated ... has not been settled.
The enclosed statement shows the amount owing to be £...
We hope to receive an early settlement of this account.
Yours faithfully
Personalised collection letters
There may be circumstances when an individual letter rather than a form letter is more appropriate. It should then be addressed to a named senior official and marked 'Confidential'.
(a) To a regular payee
Dear
ACCOUNT NUMBER 6251
As you are usually very prompt in settling your accounts, we wonder whether there is any special reason why we have not received payment of this account which is already a month overdue.
In case you may not have received the statement of account sent on 31 May showing a balance owing of £105.67, a copy is enclosed. We hope this will receive your early attention.
Yours sincerely
(b) To a new customer
Dear Sir/Madam
ACCOUNT NUMBER 5768
We regret having to remind you that we have not received payment of the balance of £105.67 due on our statement for December. This was sent to you on 2 January and a copy is enclosed.
We must remind you that unusually low prices were quoted to you on the understanding of an early settlement.
It may well be that non-payment is due to an oversight, and so we ask you to be good enough to send us your cheque within the next few days.
Yours faithfully
(c) To a customer who has sent a part-payment
Dear
Thank you for your letter of 8 March enclosing a cheque for £500 in part-payment of the balance due on our February statement.
Your payment leaves an unpaid balance of £825.62. As our policy is to work on small profit margins, we regret that we cannot grant long term credit facilities.
We are sure that you will not think it is unreasonable for us to ask for immediate payment of this balance.
Yours sincerely
Reminder to customer who has already paid
The need for a cautious approach is always necessary since the customer may not be at fault, as where the payment has gone astray, or where the supplier has received it but failed to record it
Request for payment
Dear Sir/Madam
ACCOUNT NUMBER SS42
According to our records our account for cutlery supplied to you on 21 October has not been paid.
We enclose a detailed statement showing the amount owing to be £310.62 and hope you will make an early settlement
Yours faithfully
Customer's reply
Dear
YOUR ACCOUNT NUMBER S542
I was surprised to receive your letter of 8 December stating that you had not received payment of the above account.
In fact our cheque (number 065821, drawn on Barclays Bank. Blackpool) for £310.62 was posted to you on 3 November. As this cheque appears to have gone astray, I have instructed the bank not to pay on it. A replacement cheque for the same amount is enclosed.
Yours sincerely