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Put the following points in order to show how Lisa Kaplan's letter is organized:

  • describe what action has been taken;

  • offer some kind of compensation;

  • apologise;

  • refer to the letter received;

  • show understanding and sympathy;

  • apologise again.

2.9 Write a suitable letter to deal with one of these situations. Invent an address for the people and companies concerned. Use some of the expressions from the Useful languagebox.

1. An official of a national Health Authority is angry because deliveries of drugs from your company arrived a month late. The drugs were needed urgently.

2. A company buyer refuses to accept a shipment of personalised pens sent by your company because the company's name has been misspelt on each pen.

3. An accounts manager writes to you about errors in a sales invoice you sent to them concerning the sale of 20 tables and chairs. They were billed for $40,800. The correct amount is $4,800.

2.10 Complete this reply to the complaint about delivery in the exercise above.

BEEBOP FOOTWEAR

Wholesale & Retail

MrM.Hopkins

The Golden Boot 23

Birchington Road

Cheirnsford

Essex CM4 SFG 23 May

Dear Mr Hopkins,

We were very sorry to receive your letter complaining 1________________ a damaged and incomplete consignment, order ref 20G/FF/103.

Our staff has been 2___________________ great pressure recently to deal with an unusually large number of orders, and unfortunately mistakes have occurred. We have already arranged 3__________________ all replacements and missing items to be shipped to you.

You will also be pleased to hear that, under the circumstances, we have decided to offer you a 6% discount instead of the 4% formerly agreed.

Please accept our apologies 4_______________ the inconvenience caused, and rest assured that we will do our utmost to ensure that such mistakes do not occur again 5_________________ the future.

We look forward 6________________ doing business 7________________ you again.

Yours sincerely,

Fraus Vierstraete

Sales Director

  1. Enquiries

3.1 Methods of enquiry

An enquiry can be made by telephone, telegram (cable), fax, or postcard. If you use a postcard, it is not necessary to begin with a salutation (Dear Sir, etc.) nor end with a complimentary close (Yours faithfully, etc.) Your address, the date, and reference is sufficient.

If you need to give more information about yourself or ask the supplier for more information, you will need to write a letter. The contents of this will depend on three things: how well you know your supplier; whether your supplier is at home or abroad; and the type of goods you are enquiring about - there is a difference between asking IBM about the cost of installing a complex computer and asking a publisher how much a book would cost.

3.2 Writing letters of enquiry

3.2.1 Opening

Tell your supplier what sort of firm you are.

Our company is a subsidiary of Universal Business Machines and we specialize in...

We are one of the main producers of industrial chemicals in Germany, and we are interested in...

How did you hear about the firm you are writing to? It might be useful to point out that you know a firm's associates, or that they were recommended to you by a consulate or Trade Association.

You were recommended to us by Mr John King, of Lasworn & Davies, Merchant Bankers.

We were advised by Spett. Marco Gennovisa of Milan that you were interested in supplying…

It is possible to use other references:

We were impressed by the selection of gardening tools that were displayed on your stand at this year's Gardening Exhibition held in Hamburg.

Our associates in the packaging industry speak highly of your Zeta packing machines and we would like to have more information about them. Could you send us…