- •Министерство образования Российской Федерации
- •Методические указания к практическим занятиям по деловой корреспонденции Часть 1
- •Entry Test. Letters
- •Personnel appointments
- •1.1 Applying for a position
- •1.1.1 Opening
- •1.1.2 Application form requests
- •1.1.3 Curriculum vitae
- •1.1.4 Opening
- •1.1.5 Summary of details
- •1.1.6 Explanation of previous experience
- •1.1.7 Reasons you are applying
- •1.1.8 Close
- •1.2 Specimen letters
- •1.2.1 Unsolicited letter
- •1.2.2 Reply to unsolicited letter Mitchell Hill Plc Merchant Bank
- •11-15 Montague Street London Eel 5dn
- •1.2.3 Application form
- •1.2.4 Covering letter for c.V.
- •1.2.5 Curriculum vitae
- •Curriculum vitae
- •1.2.6 Invitation for an interview
- •International Computing Services plc
- •1.3 Making a decision
- •1.3.1 Turning down an applicant
- •1.3.2 Offering a position
- •1.3.3 Openings
- •1.3.4 Details
- •1.3.5 Close
- •1.4 Specimen letters
- •1.4.1 Letter offering position
- •International Computing Services plc
- •1.4.2 Letters confirming acceptance
- •1.5 Points to remember
- •Writing Curriculum Vitae (Resume). Covering letter
- •1.2 In the box are headings from a typical cv. Look at the extracts from the cv of Tomoko Horiguchi, a Japanese woman working in England. Under which of the cv headings should each extract be placed?
- •1.3 When you apply for a job you usually send a cv and covering letter. Which of the following do you usually do in a covering letter?
- •Letter of application
- •1.4 A letter of application.Put the paragraphs in the correct order:
- •1.5 Complete Fiona Scott's letter of application using the following verbs:
- •1.6 Giving news to job applicants.Read this letter making an offer of employment. Then decide whether the statements below are true or false:
- •1.7 The draft letter below is addressed to an unsuccessful candidate for the vacancy at Slim Gyms. Put a circle around any language that you think is too informal for the situation:
- •1.8 Complete this corrected version of the draft letter using items from below:
- •1.9 Study the Useful languagebox below. Use a dictionary to check the meaning of any words or phrases which are unfamiliar. Add three words or phrases to each column. Useful language
- •1.10 Complete the letter using suitable words and phrases from the Useful languagebox. The letter in brackets indicates which column you should check to find the correct word or phrase.
- •1.11 Responding to job applications. Read the letter and fill in each blank with an appropriate passive form of the verbs below.
- •1.12 Write Andrew's reply to Karen Poulson.
- •2.2 Writing general complaints
- •2.2.1 Opening
- •2.2.2 The language of complaints
- •2.2.3 Explaining the problem
- •2.2.4 Suggesting a solution
- •2.3 Replying to letters of complaint
- •2.3.1 Opening
- •2.3.2 Getting time to investigate the complaint
- •2.3.3 Explaining the mistake
- •2.3.4 Solving the problem
- •2.3.5 Rejecting a complaint
- •2.3.6 Closing
- •2.4 Specimen letters
- •2.4.1 Complaint of damage f. Lynch & Co. Ltd.
- •2.4.2 Reply to complaint of damage
- •Satex s.P.A.
- •Via di Pietra Papa, 00146 Roma
- •2.4.3 Complaint of non-delivery
- •2.4.3 Reply to complaint of non-delivery
- •2.5 Points to remember
- •Making complaints
- •2.1 Jonathan Webb, Marketing Director of Executive Golfing Ltd, placed an order for an advertisement with an agency. On 15 May he stated the following requirements to Rachel Levy at rl Media:
- •2.2 Reorder the following, so that they show the usual structure of a letter of complaint:
- •2.3 Study the expressions in the Useful language box, then choose one of the situations below and write a letter of complaint: Useful language
- •2.4 Letters of complaint. Unscramble the sentences and re-order them to make two different letters of complaint. Write the sentence numbers in the table.
- •2.5 Complaints and suggestions. Complete this business e-mail with an appropriate form of the verbs below:
- •Replying to Letters of Complaint
- •2.6 Reply to the e-mail above (ex. 2.5). Useful language
- •Indicating action
- •2.7 The text of a letter replying to a complaint is given. Complete it, choosing from the alternatives given to fill in the gaps.
- •2.8 Silvina Pietragalli recently flew home to Argentina. She had a very unpleasant flight and she wrote to Alpha Airlines to complain about it.
- •Put the following points in order to show how Lisa Kaplan's letter is organized:
- •2.9 Write a suitable letter to deal with one of these situations. Invent an address for the people and companies concerned. Use some of the expressions from the Useful languagebox.
- •2.10 Complete this reply to the complaint about delivery in the exercise above.
- •Enquiries
- •3.1 Methods of enquiry
- •3.2 Writing letters of enquiry
- •3.2.1 Opening
- •3.2.2 Asking for catalogues, price-lists, prospectuses
- •3.2.3 Asking for details
- •3.2.4 Asking for samples, patterns, demonstrations
- •3.2.5 Suggesting terms, methods of payment, discounts
- •3.2.6 Closing
- •3.3. Specimen letters
- •3.3.1 Reply to an advertisement
- •3.3.2 Enquiry from a retailer to a foreign manufacturer
- •F. Lynch & Co. Ltd.
- •3.3.3 Request for an estimate
- •3.4 Points to remember
- •Writing letters of enquiry
- •3.1 Complete the letter with the following phrases:
- •3.2 Below you will see parts of three letters of enquiry. Put the correct word or phrase in each blank. Choose from the following list. Use each item once only.
- •Replying to letters of enquiry
- •3.5 Below you will see parts of three letters answering an enquiry. Put the correct word or phrase in each blank. Choose from the following list. Use each item once only.
- •3.6 Read the letter of enquiry below, and cross out the one sentence which does not fit in.
- •3.7 Write a suitable reply to the letter in ex. 3.6, following the guidelines below.
- •List of References
- •Методические указания к практическим занятиям по деловой корреспонденции Часть 1
2.4.3 Complaint of non-delivery
The final example in this section is an illustration of a strong complaint to a supplier. In this case the customer, Forham Vehicles PLC, makes lorries for export. They placed an order with Baden, to supply them with 60 dynamos for an export shipment of lorries that were to be sent to Greece. Baden have neither delivered the order, nor answered Forham's previous letter urging them to make delivery.
FORHAM VEHICLES PLC
Lever Estate, Scarborough, Yorkshire Y011 3BS
Directors: M. Blackburn, M.H. Thomson
Telephone 0723 16952 Reg. England: 8969135
Fax: 0723 81953 VAT. 1462 321 17
Telex: 437865
Mr R. Zeitman Date: 20th June 200-
E.F. Baden AG
Ztilpicher Str. 10-20
D-4000 Dusseldorf 11
Dear Mr Zeitman
Order No. VC 58391
We are writing to you with reference to the above order and our letter of 22 May in which we asked you when we could expect delivery of the 60 dynamos (Artex model 55) you were to have supplied on 3 June for an export order.
We have tried to contact you by phone, but could not get anyone in your factory who knew anything about this matter.
It is essential that we deliver this consignment to our Greek customers on time as this was an initial order from them and would give us an opening in the Greek market.
Our deadline is 28 June, and the lorries have been completed except for the dynamos that need to be fitted.
Unless we receive the components within the next five days, the order will be cancelled and placed elsewhere. We should warn you that we are holding you to your delivery contract and if any loss results because of this late delivery we will be taking legal action.
Yours sincerely,
M. Blackburn
M. Blackburn
2.4.3 Reply to complaint of non-delivery
Note how this letter is both apologetic but firm. Though Baden accept responsibility for the problems Forham face in delivering their consignment to their Greek customers, Herr Zeitman rejects the threat of legal action by drawing Mr Blackburn's attention to a clause in their contract staling that the company will not be responsible for 'unforeseen circumstances that arise'. However, Herr Zeitman is flexible enough to realize he must not antagonize his customer, so he allows Mr Blackburn the opportunity to cancel the order if he can make other arrangements.
Therefore, the two main points this letter makes are - first, do not commit yourself to contracts unless you are absolutely certain they can be fulfilled. Second, always try and be as flexible as possible with customers or associates even if you are in a strong position; it will improve your business reputation.
E. F. Baden AG
Zulpicher Str. 10-20, D-4000 Dusseldorf 11
Tel: (0211) 38.34.06/09 Fax: (0211) 3B.34.271 Telex: 032651
Mr M. Blackburn 29 June 200-
Forham Vehicles PLC
Lever Estate
Scarborough YO 11 3BS
Dear Mr Blackburn,
Thank you for your letter of 20 June concerning your order (No. VC 58391) which should have been supplied to you on 3 June.
First let me apologize for your order not being delivered on the due date and for the problems you have experienced in getting in touch with us about it. But as you may have read in your newspapers we have experienced an industrial dispute which has involved both administrative staff and employees on the shop floor, and as a consequence has held up all production over the past few weeks.
I can tell you that the dispute has been settled and we are back to normal production. There is a backlog of orders to catch up on, but we are using associates of ours to help us fulfil all outstanding commitments: your order has been given priority, so we should be able to deliver the dynamos before the end of this week.
May I point out, with respect, that your contract with us did have a standard clause staling that delivery dates would be met unless unforeseen circumstances arose, and we think you will agree that a dispute is an exceptional circumstance. However, we quite understand your problem and will allow you to cancel your contract if it will help you to meet your own commitments with your Greek customers. But we will not accept any responsibility for any action they may take against you.
Once again let me say how much I regret the inconvenience this delay has caused, and emphasize that it was due to factors we could not have known about when we accepted your delivery dates.
Please phone or fax me letting me know if you wish us to complete your order or whether you would prefer to make other arrangements.
I look forward to hearing from you within the next day or so. Yours sincerely,
R. Zeitman
R. Zeitman
Managing Director