IELTS_Writing
.docI think it is impossible to estimate all the benefits and drawbacks of technology affecting our relations with different people. (20)
Итого, имеем, привожу полный текст сочинений: Test 1 Almost any day of the week you can look at a newspaper and read articles discussing how to make our children good members of our society. There are several controversial points of view on this issue. The first regards schools as harmful in this respect due to some probability that it is difficult to find individual approaches to every child and prefers to turn to family as the best option to do this job. An alternative point is based on the advantages of schools as social institutions to teach this. On the one hand, it is obvious that parents are the ones who are always close to their children. And they can find individual approaches to them and share their own experience. It does not matter whether you like it or not you have to recognize the fact that we are like our relatives and likely to follow their way in becoming good or bad members of our society as well. So their experience, whether successful or not, may be of the prime value for us. However, this attitude may cause a lot of concerns among people who believe that only schools are able to deliver all the information necessary to become true members of the society with long history. Ordinary people may lack knowledge and skills to teach anything even to their own children. Moreover, schools can be taken as models of the society which students are going to join in their adulthood. So these institutions may be considered the best for the job. From my point of view it makes sense definitely. In any case, an attitude to this issue always depends on a particular person’s character and his or her personal circumstances or background. (287) То же сочинение, но цветом выделены шаблонные фразы и подчёркнуты фразы, взятые из пояснения к заданию, из темы. Test 1 Almost any day of the week you can look at a newspaper and read articles discussing how to make our children good members of our society. There are several controversial points of view on this issue. The first regards schools as harmful in this respect due to some probability that it is difficult to find individual approaches to every child and prefers to turn to family as the best option to do this job. An alternative point is based on the advantages of schools as social institutions to teach this. On the one hand, it is obvious that parents are the ones who are always close to their children. And they can find individual approaches to them and share their own experience. It does not matter whether you like it or not you have to recognize the fact that we are like our relatives and likely to follow their way in becoming good or bad members of our society as well. So their experience, whether successful or not, may be of the prime value for us. However, this attitude may cause a lot of concerns among people who believe that only schools are able to deliver all the information necessary to become true members of the society with long history. Ordinary people may lack knowledge and skills to teach anything even to their own children. Moreover, schools can be taken as models of the society which students are going to join in their adulthood. So these institutions may be considered the best for the job. From my point of view it makes sense definitely. In any case, an attitude to this issue always depends on a particular person’s character and his or her personal circumstances or background.
Слов из шаблона – 147. Из 140 слов, написанных на экзамене, 20 взяты из пояснения к заданию. И только 120 придумано на месте.
Обратите внимание, насколько просты фразы, набранные чёрным шрифтом. Это те фразы, которые придуманы на месте, они не взяты из шаблона или описания задания. Все сложные фразы этого сочинения – это части шаблона. Если у вас достойный шаблон, на экзамене можно не заморачиваться.
Test 2 Problems relating to new technologies in general have always been one of the topical issues of all over the world. How should we deal with them especially when it comes to relations that people make? How do they affect us? Are there more positive or rather negative effects in all that? Discussing these controversial questions it is impossible to give one well-defined answer for sure. On the one hand, it is obvious that IT allows us to get in touch with each other more easily. Probably nobody would argue that it is an advantage. We can make new fiends from quite a wide range of places even on the other continents. But what is more important for me, for example, I can daily contact my family living thousands kilometers away by Skype. From my point of view it makes sense definitely. It helps me stay aware of my family’s circumstances and brings me closer to my mum and dad. However, this attitude may cause a lot of concerns among people who believe that it is not real communication. Nobody can deny that it is impossible to replace face-to-face conversations with virtual ones totally. Of crucial importance, in my opinion, is how we define the matter in question. Going back to my point of ‘distant’ friends, are they real friends? People who you never see in person come to your life and sometimes may influence your decisions, for instance. I would stay quite cautious about that. But it is necessary to take into account all the circumstances of each individual case.
I think it is impossible to estimate all the benefits and drawbacks of technology affecting our relations with different people. (282) То же сочинение, но цветом выделены шаблонные фразы, подчёркнуты фразы из темы.
Test 2 Problems relating to new technologies in general have always been one of the topical issues of all over the world. How should we deal with them especially when it comes to relations that people make? How do they affect us? Are there more positive or rather negative effects in all that? Discussing these controversial questions it is impossible to give one well-defined answer for sure. On the one hand, it is obvious that IT allows us to get in touch with each other more easily. Probably nobody would argue that it is an advantage. We can make new fiends from quite a wide range of places even on the other continents. But what is more important for me, for example, I can daily contact my family living thousands kilometers away by Skype. From my point of view it makes sense definitely. It helps me stay aware of my family’s circumstances and brings me closer to my mum and dad. However, this attitude may cause a lot of concerns among people who believe that it is not real communication. Nobody can deny that it is impossible to replace face-to-face conversations with virtual ones totally. Of crucial importance, in my opinion, is how we define the matter in question. Going back to my point of ‘distant’ friends, are they real friends? People who you never see in person come to your life and sometimes may influence your decisions, for instance. I would stay quite cautious about that. But it is necessary to take into account all the circumstances of each individual case.
I think it is impossible to estimate all the benefits and drawbacks of technology affecting our relations with different people.
Слов из шаблона – 177. Из 105 слов, написанных на экзамене, 8 взяты из пояснения к заданию. И только 97 придумано непосредственно на экзамене. Для того, чтобы ознакомиться с бòльшим количеством примеров, взятых из конкретной практики подготовки к экзамену, рекомендую также обратиться к моему пособию «IELTS: стратегия победы. История одного эссе».