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2)IlpOKOMMCHHtpOBaTb npo6rreMy.
3)0npeL{CJ111Tb 00311lll110 aBTOpa 11CXO,[{H0f0 TeKCTa no ,[{aHHOH npo6rreMe.
4)BhiCKaJaTh co6cTBeHHOe MHeHI1e, corrraci1BIIII1Cb 11rr11 He corrraci1BIIII1Ch c asTopoM.
5) Ll,oKa3aTb CBOIO TOLJKY 3pCHI1SI, np11Be,[{SI He MeHee LlBYX apryMeHTOB (Ka)f(,[{biH 113 HI1X ,[{aeTCSI B HOBOM a63aue):
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•BTOpOH apryMeHT - 113 C06CTBeHHOfO )1{113HCHHOfO OObJTa 11JII1 :>KI13HCHH0f0 OObJTa L{pyri1X JIIOL{eH.
6)J1TOfOBbiH BbiBOL{ (3aKJIIOlJCH11e).
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Mbl. 0L{HaKO XOpOWO, CCJII1 B saweif pa60Te 6yL{yT np11CYTCTBOBaTb H BCTynJieHHe, H 3aKJIIOLJeHI1C.
3. AJiropHTM UOLli'OTOBKHK H3UHC3HHIO COI.JHHeHHH-pacCyiKLleHHH C yiJeTOM nJiaHa
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f1po6JieMa - BOnpoc, KOTOpbiH HHTepecyeT aBTOpa 11CXOL{H0f0 TCKCTa H BbJ3biBaeT ero pa3L{YMbSI
LI,OBOJibHO LJaCTO B TCKCTe 3aTparHBaeTCSI Cpa3y HCCKOJibKO npo6JICM. Kaey10 113 HI1X Bbi6paTb L{JISI KOMMCHTapmi H nOJIO:>KI1Tb B OCHOBy COlfHHCHHSI? PeKOMCHL{YCTCSI COCpCL{OT0411TbCSI Ha npo6rreMe, KO-
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C<f>opMyrrHposaTh npo6rreMy MO)f(HO L{BYMSI cnoco6aMI1:
Cnoco6ht ciJopMyJiupooKu npo6JieMhl
1. B BI1L{e sonpoca (npo6rreMa 11 ecTb sonpoc,
HaL{ KOTOpblM paccy)KL{aeT aBTOp HCXOL{HOfO
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2. CoLJeTaHHeM crrosa npo6o1eiw c HMeHeM cy-
I..UeCTBI1TeJibHblM, ynOTpe6rreHHhiM B p0,[{11-
TeJihHOM na,[{e:>Ke: npo6rreMa (qero?).
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B )f(I13HI1 lfCJIOBeKa.
B TeKCTe n11caTerrs. NN no,[{HI1MaeTCSI npo6JieMa (qero?) OJ!I1H04eCTBa.
. Pe-.ieoLie K.Jiuwe, ucnoJILJyeMMe npu «t»opMyJiupooKe npo6JieMLI, JaTpouyToii: aoTopoM uc-
XO,[lHOro TeKCTa H BbifipaHHOH DHWYII(HM ,[lJIH KOMMeHTHpOBaHHH!
•B csoeM TeKcTe 11y6mnu-rcT (11HCaTeJih) NN paccMaTJ)HBaeT (110.U.HHMaeT, Bhi,[lBHraeT Ha sce-
o6mee o6c)')K,[leHHe,3aTJ)amsaeT, o6pamaeT BHHMaHHe I.JHTaTeneH: Ha) 11po6neMy (qero?);
• TeKCT 11y6nHI.J,HCTa (11HCaTeiDI) NN 3acTaBHJI MeH.s~ 3a.U.YMaThC.SI Ha.u. 11po6neMoH: (qero?);
• CnmKHa.SI, Ba)I(Ha.SI, cephe3Ha.SI, aKTYaJihHa.SI, 3Jio6o.u.HeBHa.s~, OCTJ)a.SI, cpHnococpcKa.SI 11po6neMa. DpuMe1Jauue:
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rHe B011pOChi 3arparHBaiOTC.SI s TeKcTe H3BecTHoro 11HCaTeJI.SI NN. O.llHaKo HaH6onee .lleTaJihHO asTopoM paccMaipHBaeTc.s~ 11po6neMa (qero?)•.•
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TaK uaquuaTb pa6ory HeJILJH: «A6mop oaHHozo meKcma 3ampazu6aem aKmyaJlbHJIO npo6Jie-
My. 3mo meMa Hpa6cm6eHHozo 6bt6opa '-le.Jl06eKa 6 mou WlU uHou :JJCU3eHHou cumyalfUU, oco6eHHo ecRu OHa C6Jl3aHa c pucKoM OllR co6cm6eHHou :JJCU3HU»;
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Dpo6JieMaTnKa TeKcToB Er3 no pyccKoMy HJLIKY
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2. PoJib ,ll;eTCTBa B cTanoBJieuuu JiuquocTH qeJioBeKa, ero upaBCTBeHHbiX opueuTupos:
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BaHHC xapaKTepa qeJIOBCKa C06hiTHH, KOTOpbiC npOH30lllJIH B .LJ:CTCTBe?).
3. POJib KJiaccuqeCKOH JIHTepal)'pbiB ,li;YXOBHOM pa3BHTHH COBpeMeHHOf'O06IUeCTBa:
enpo6JieMa pOJIH KHHfH B HHTCJIJICKTYaJibHOM, .LJ:YXOBHOM, HpaBCTBCHHOM pa3BHTHH qeJIOBCKa;
•npo6JieMa CHH)I(CHHH ypOBH~ qHTaTCJibCKOH aKTHBHOCTH B COBpCMCHHOM o6rn;eCTBC (lloqeMy
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enp06JieMa llOHHMaHHH Ba)I(HOCTH H HC06XO.LJ:HMOCTH HJyqeHHH JIHTeparypbi B lllKOJIC (Hy)KHO JIH HJyqaTh JIHTeparypy COBpCMCHHbiM lllKOJibHHKaM?).
4. CJIO:IKHOCTb u npoTusopequsocTb qeJioseqecKnx nocl)'nKoB:
•npo6JICMa npe.naTCJibCTBa, CTaBlllCfO npHqHHOH pa3pyrneHHH .npy)I(CCKHX OTHOlllCHHH (B03-
MO)KH0 JIH npO.LJ:OJI)I(CHHC .LJ:py)l(6bi llOCJIC npe.LJ:aTCJibCTBa?);
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•npo6JieMa OTJIHqH~ HCTHHHOfO repOH3Ma OT JI)KCrepOH3Ma, CBH3aHHOfO C 6eCCMbiCJICHHbiM pHCKOM C06CTBCHHOH )KH3Hbl0.
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•npo6JICMa COBCCTH H OTBCTCTBCHHOCTH qeJIOBCKa 3a CBOH llOCTYllKH (K qeMy MO)I(CT npHBCCTH XaJiaTHOC, paBHO.LJ:YlllHOC OTHOlllCHHH qeJIOBCKa K CBOCMY .neny?);
•npo6neMa qenoseqecKoro ynopCTsa B .nocTH)I(CHHH noCTaBJICHHhiX u:eneli;
•npo6JieMa qeJIOBeqeCKOro 6JiaropO.LJ:CTBa (B qeM 3aKJIIOqaeTC~ HCTHHHOC BCJIHqHe qeJIOBCKa?).
6.qeCTb H qeJIOBeqeCKOe ,li;OCTOHHCTBO:
•npo6JieMa YTPaTbi MOpaJibHhiX u:eHHOCTeii (K qeMy npHBO.LJ:HT YTPaTa MopaJibHhiX u:eHHOCTeli?);
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7. 0THOmeHHH qeJIOBeKa C ,ll;pyrHMH JIIO,ll;bMH:
• npo6JICMa npeO.LJ:OJICHH~ 3fOH3Ma B OTHOlllCHHHX C .LJ:pyrHMH JIIO.LJ:bMM;
•npo6JieMa CaMOOT.LJ:aqH B OTHOlllCHHHX C qeJIOBCKOM, KOTOpOrO cqHTaClllb .LJ:pyroM;
•npo6JieMa HCTHHHOH .npy)l(6hi;
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9. 0.LJ.HHOqeCTBO qeJIOBeKa
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• npo6JieMa O)lHHOKOH CTapOCTH. |
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•npo6JieMa Ha3Ha4CHH}I nO.li,JIHHHOrO HCKYCCTBa (KaKOC HCKYCCTBO HC06XO)lHMO 06ll.{CCTBy?);
•npo6neMa socnpH}ITH}I MY3biKH qenoseKOM.
11. 0Tuomeuue qeJioBeKa K Mnpy npupo.LJ.LI
•npo6neMa 6e3.lJ.YIIIHOro, noTpe6HTCJibCKOro, 6e3)1(aJIOCTHoro OTHOIIIeHH}I LJenoseKa K MHPY npHpO.li,bi;
•np06JieMa BOcnpHHM4HBOCTH HJIH HCBOcnpHHM4HBOCTH 4CJIOBCKa K KpaCOTC npHpO.llbl;
•npo6JieMa BJIH}JHH}IwwwKpaCOTbl npHpO..llblctegeHa HaCTpOCHHC H o6pa3.infoMbiCJICH 4CJIOBCKa;
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JIOBCKa, ero B3aHMOOTHOIIICHH}I C npHpo.n:oif?);
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12. Jiepe3CHOe OTHOWeHHe qeJIOBeKa K HlbiKy.
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.SI3b1Ke? KaK oTHOC.SITC}I cospeMeHHhie poccH.SIHe K eynhrype csoeH: pe4H? lloLJeMy Heo6xo-
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13. qeJIOBeK H BJ18CTb, KOTOpOH OH Ha)J.eJieH
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14. CocTpa.LJ.auue OKPY*BIOIUHM
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