
- •Предисловие
- •Introduction
- •Sender's address
- •Inside (or receiver's) address
- •1 Surname known
- •Structure of a business letter (1)
- •16 Bellview Road
- •16 Bellview Road
- •2 Title known
- •3 Department known
- •4 Only company known
- •Order of inside addresses
- •Facoltà di Medicina LehrstuI für Bodenkunde
- •Via Gentile 182 Amalienstrasse
- •Industrial House 6000 East Camelback Road
- •Bolton bl4 8tf United States
- •Style and punctuation of addresses
- •'For the attention of’
- •Salutations
- •The body of the letter
- •Complimentary closes
- •Signatures
- •Stuctue of a business letter (2)
- •34 Linden Avenue
- •C ompany position
- •Letterheads
- •1 Type of company
- •2 Boards of Directors
- •3 Addresses
- •4 Registered number
- •References
- •Enclosures
- •‘Private and confidential’
- •Subject titles
- •Structure of a business letter (3)
- •197, Goethestrabe
- •Too long or too short?
- •First paragraph
- •Middle paragraphs
- •Final paragraph
- •Courtesy
- •Idioms and colloquial language
- •Abbreviations
- •Figures
- •Prepositions
- •Titles, names, and addresses
- •Enclosures
- •Body of a Letter Requesting Information
- •Inquiry to a tour agency (private)
- •421 Michigan Avenue
- •Inquiry to a hotel (private)
- •421 Michigan Avenue
- •Inquiry to a hotel (business)
- •Bunbury estate builders
- •17 Fen Road * London * ec3 5ap
- •Body of a Letter Requesting a Service
- •Reservation of a tour
- •421 Michigan Avenue
- •Inquiry (enquiry)
- •Affirmative reply
- •344 North Cedar Avenue * Los Angeles * ca 90004
- •Phone (213) 655 0344
- •44 Cedar Avenue
- •I am delighted to enclose a skyways Holidays Golf brochure for next season.
- •Falcon ltd
- •1, Ligovsky Avenue, St.Petersburg, Russia, 191123
- •421 Michigan Avenue
- •I am delighted to enclose a falcon Family Tours brochure for next season. This brochure offers a widest selection of tours to St.Petersburg, Russia.
- •Visa support and registration in the hotel are included in the total price.
- •Hotel okhtinskaya
- •4, Bolsheokhtinsky Avenue * St.Petersburg, 195027 * Russia
- •421 Michigan Avenue
- •Body of a Letter Suggesting Alternative
- •Marlborough hotel
- •West Yorkshire jx2 6hc
- •Frederick Hotel
- •Body of a Letter Confirming Plans
- •Confirmation of a tour
- •Falcon ltd
- •1, Ligovsky Avenue, St.Petersburg, Russia, 191123
- •Confirmation of a hotel reservation
- •Replying to an inquiry
- •Body of a Letter Canceling Plans
- •Cancellation of a tour
- •Changes and cancellations
- •The language of complaints
- •Complaint
- •Body of an Adjustment Letter
- •1674 Sea Harbor Drive
- •I am extremely sorry that you found the service provided by Reception, the Hall Porter, and the Floor Waiter not up to our usual standard. I apologize for this and will make enquiries about it.
- •I hope we will continue to receive your custom and that, if you have a complaint, you will inform my staff immediately so that we can deal with the problem there and then.
- •Telex details
- •Telex (hotel reservation)
- •Telex (Inquiry)
- •Telex (reply to an inquiry)
- •Telex (reservation)
- •F. Lynch & Co. Ltd.
- •Fax transmission
- •Fax (reply to an enquiry)
- •Organizing a conference (inquiry)
- •Bunbury estate builders
- •17 Fen Road London ec3 5ap
- •Organizing a conference (conformation)
- •Hotel okhtinskaya
- •4, Bolsheokhtinsky Avenue,
- •Organizing a conference ( a letter providing information) grand-hotel
- •41 Goethe Strasse Berlin 156 ul
- •Organizing a conference (a letter requesting information)
'For the attention of’
An alternative to including the recipient's name or position in the address is to use an 'attention line' as here:
International Hotel
1-5 Greenfield Road Liverpool
L22 OPL
For the attention of the Hotel
Manager Dear
Sir,
Salutations
Dear Sir opens a letter written to a man whose name you do not know.
Dear Sirs is used to address a company.
Dear Madam is used to address a woman, whether single or married, whose name you do not know.
Dear Sir or Madam is used to address a person of whom you know neither the name nor the sex.
When you do know the name of the person you are writing to, the salutation takes the form of Dear followed by a courtesy title and the person's surname. Initials or first names are not generally used in salutations:
Dear Mr Smith,
not Dear Mr J. Smith or Dear Mr John Smith.
The comma after the salutation is optional (Dear Sir, or Dear Sir).
Note that in the USA a letter to a company usually opens with Gentlemen, followed by a colon, not with Dear Sirs.
|
British |
American |
Formal or Routine |
Dear Sir, Dear Sirs, Dear Madam, Dear Sir or Madam, Mesdames, |
Dear Sir: Gentlemen: Dear Mr Brown: Dear Miss Smith: Dear Mrs Brown: |
Informal |
Dear Mr Brown, Dear Miss Smith, |
Dear Mr Brown: Dear Miss Roberts: |
Personal |
Dear Mr Brown, My dear Brown, Dear Jim, |
Dear Mr Brown, My dear Mr Brown, Dear George, |
The body of the letter
This may be indented or blocked. It is a matter of choice. Whichever style you use, you must be consistent and use that style all through the letter.
It is usual to leave a line space between paragraphs in the body of the letter; if the blocked style is used, this is essential.
Complimentary closes
If the letter begins Dear Sir, Dear Sirs, Dear Madam or Dear Sir or Madam, it will close with Yours faithfully.
If the letter begins with a personal name – Dear Mr James, Dear Mrs Robinson, Dear Ms Jasmin – it will close with Yours sincerely.
Avoid closing with old-fashioned phrases such as:
We remain yours faithfully, Respectfully yours, etc.
The comma after the complimentary close is optional (Yours faithfully, or faithfully yours).
Note that Americans tend to close even formal letters with Yours truly or Truly yours, which is unusual in the UK in commercial correspondence. But a letter to a friend or acquaintance may end with Yours truly or the casual Best wishes.
The position of the complimentary close - on the left, right or in the centre of the page – is a matter of choice. It depends on the style of the letter (blocked letters tend to put the close on the left, indented letters tend to put them in the centre) and on your firm's preference.
|
British |
American |
Formal or Routine |
Yours faithfully,
|
Very truly yours, Sincerely yours, Yours very truly |
Informal |
Yours sincerely, Yours truly, |
Sincerely yours, Cordially yours, |
Personal |
Yours sincerely, Sincerely, With best wishes, Yours, |
Sincerely yours, With kind regards, With best regards, Sincerely, Yours, |