Комментарии к выполненному заданию

Решение коммуникативной задачи

Аспект 1. Ответ на вопрос, когда было сделано фото, дан

Ответ дан: This photo I took in the last day.

Аспект 2. Ответ на вопрос, кто/что изображено на фото, дан

Ответ на вопрос дан: There is a snow-girl and children behind her.

Аспект 3. Ответ на вопрос, что происходит на фото, дан

Дан ответ на вопрос, что происходит на фото: She is dancing and children are making a circle and going round.

Аспект 4. Ответ на вопрос, почему автор сделал это фото, дан

Есть ответ на вопрос: I took this photo because /I liked this girl. She is pure and she shows all the mentally of Russia. She is smiling and that is fine. In my opinion she is very kind and outgo person. And the children on the front…ой… on the background they are / playing too.

Аспект 5. Ответ на вопрос, почему автор решил показать это фото другу, дан

Нет ответа на вопрос, почему автор решил показать это фото другу.

Объем

11 фраз

Итоговый балл (максимальный бал – 3)

2 балла

Организация

Высказывания

Наличие вступительной и заключительной фразы, завершенность высказывания

Есть вступительная фраза, есть заключительная фраза, однако она идет после очень длиной паузы, что нарушает связность текста.

Логичность и использование средств логической связи

Средства логической связи используются: As you know, So, In my opinion, and. Высказывание в целом логично.

Итоговый балл (Максимальный балл – 2)

2 балла

Языковое оформление высказывания

Максимальный балл – 2

0 баллов

Лексико-грамматические ошибки: 0 (This photo I took in the last day – надо оn the last day + порядок слов; children behind her – надо some children…; mentally – над mentality; outgo – надо outgoing; she is very kind person –надо a very kind person

Фонетические ошибки: неправильно произносит звуки [ŋ] в слове “smiling”, “making”.

Задание 3, вариант 4, ответ 1 (скрипт)

I want to present you first photo. This is my sister. I decide to show this picture to you because it is her wedding photo. She is very beautiful and happy. I took this photo last weekend.

Задание 3, вариант 5, ответ 1 (скрипт)

I think that this picture… was made maybe one year ago. You can see on this picture my younger sister and brother. They were walking in the park and… I just bought a new photo camera and I made a photo of everything. So… I think that this picture is really funny and I sometimes see it and my mood changes to be really happy and so on.

Задание 3, вариант 6, ответ 1 (скрипт)

This photo was taken last summer during my travel to the forest camp. In the photo I’m trying to cook some porridge with my brother. It was our first experience when we tried to cook something outsides and it was a bit difficult for us but we do all our best and we decided to took such photos because it was kind memorable event and I want to remember it. I also decided to show it to you because I think we can organize picnic and make something like this together.

Задание 3, вариант 4, ответ 1 (скрипт)

Well, I took this photo about month ago. It was in a wedding party of my best friends. In this photo my best friend Jessica. I think she is so pretty. Well, how I said it was married. And Jessica married Jack. Well, I took this photo because Jessica looks very beautiful and very happy. And I was impressed there. And I show you this picture because I want let you to be impressed … this.

Задание 3, вариант 6, ответ 1 (скрипт)

This photo was taken last summer during my travel to the forest camp. In the photo I’m trying to cook some porridge with my brother. It was our first experience when we tried to cook something outsides and it was a bit difficult for us but we do all our best and we decided to took such photos because it was kind memorable event and I want to remember it. I also decided to show it to you because I think we can organize picnic and make something like this together.