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  1. Personalization. Write two emails similar to ones that you have to write in your own real-life job. Учебный элемент 3 (уэ – 3) Emails – commercial

In the exchange of emails below a customer makes an enquiry and the supplier replies:

Email 1

To.- … info@powerpack.com

Subject: Specifications for power packs

I visited your stand at the Energy Trade Fair in Hanover and was impressed by your range of power packs based on fuel cell technology.

I picked up a brochure about the fair, and would now like some more detailed technical specifications for your range of fuel cells for small handheld devices.

In particular, I would like to know about power packs suitable lor a portable DVD player.

Please send details of size, energy output, etc, I look forward to hearing from you.

Email 2

To – ... Dan Bailey

Subject: Info re power packs

Thank you for your email. I'm attaching a document that gives full details of our range of power packs.

Can I draw your attention to models FC68 and FC72? These would be ideal for a small handheld device.

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss your needs in more detail. May I suggest that I call you in a day or two?

In the meantime, please don't hesitate to contact me personally if you have any questions. My direct line is given below.

Best wishes

After further telephone conversations and emails the customer now places an order:

Email 3

To... Sales department

Subject: Order for model FC72

Following our recent conversations, please find attached our order no. JX034 for 25,000 fuel cells model FC72.

We agreed that the goods will be sent by sea (CIF Busan), securely packed in 25 cases of 1,000 items each.

The goods must be delivered to Busan port by 24 April at the latest.

If any of these conditions are not met, please refer to the detailed terms in our contract for actions that we are entitled to take.

We will pay by irrevocable letter of credit. Please send copies of the shipping documents and invoice directly to me as pdf files.

Please acknowledge receipt of this order

Thank you and we look forward to doing more business with you in the future.

In email 3 the customer confirms details that have been covered in previous discussions.

The phrases you need

Enquiry

I visited your stand at ... and was impressed by ...

I would like some detailed specifications for ...

In particular, I would like to know ...

Please send details of your product range and prices / discounts I delivery times I terms of payment, etc.

Reply to enquiry

Thank you for your email of 12 February enquiring about...

I'm attaching a document that gives full details of...

Can I draw your attention to ...?

Our standard terms are payment within 28 days, but we offer discounts for prompt payment. We also offer quantity discounts for large purchases, We can ship within one week of a firm order, I would welcome the opportunity to discuss your needs in more detail.

We hope that you find our quotation satisfactory and look forward to receiving your order.

Please don't hesitate to contact me personally if you have any questions.

Placing an order

Following our recent conversations, please find attached our order no. ... for ...

If you don't have the items requested in stock, please advise us immediately. The goods must be delivered by ... at the latest. Please confirm your delivery date.

If any of these conditions are not met, please refer to the detailed terms in our contract for actions that we are entitled to take.

Please acknowledge receipt of this order.

Shipping an order

The goods will be sent by sea / air / road / rail and will be securely packed in boxes / case / crates. We look forward to doing more business with you in the future.

Exercises