
- •Writing
- •STUDENT LEARNING SUPPORT
- •Library Extension
- •Contents
- •Introductions
- •Typical contents of an introduction
- •The myth of violence – we are living at the most peaceful time
- •Typical ‘shape’ of an introduction
- •Discuss
- •Over the past twenty five years, since Australia embraced multiculturalism as a policy,
- •Another example
- •Example Introduction
- •Example introduction
- •Thesis statement
- •Which is a better thesis statement?
- •used in thesis
- •Your turn...
- •Paragraphs
- •Paragraphs
- •Topic sentence
- •Other topic sentences examples
- •Conclusion
- •Summary of main points & conclusion
- •Conclusion
- •Example
- •Conclusion
- •Your turn...
- •Essay structure in
- •Checklist
- •References

Other topic sentences examples
•The area of art also had a great influence on the settlers
•In addition to language and art, agriculture is another area in which native Americans had a great and lasting influence.

Conclusion
•A summary of the main ideas put forward in the body.
•Reiterates what was said in the thesis statement
– try to use different words.
•No new information/arguments
•What is the logical conclusion from what you’ve said?
•Tries to sum up, prove a point, make recommendations, lead to further actions etc.
•Often looks at the future implications

Summary of main points & conclusion
Future implications

Conclusion
To put it simply, a conclusion:
1.Restates the thesis statement 2.Summarises the body paragraphs
3.Finishes with a ‘meaningful comment’ (i.e. a prediction, evaluation, suggestion)

Example
Conclusion
•In conclusion, it can be seen from the examples of rivers, towns and even city names, the extent native Americans have influenced language. It is clear that the people of the United States are deeply indebted to Native Americans for the contributions to this important aspect of US culture.

Conclusion
1. Restate the thesis statement:
‘native Americans have influenced language’
2. Summarise the body paragraphs:
‘it can be seen from the examples of rivers, towns and even city names’
3. Finish with a ‘meaningful comment’:
‘It is clear that the people of the United States are deeply indebted to Native Americans for the contributions to this important aspect of US culture’.

Your turn...
Write a conclusion to your essay:
‘Laptops should be banned at Bond University’

Essay structure in
a nutshell...
1.Tell the readers what you're going to tell them (introduction).
2.Tell them (body).
3.Tell them what you told them & what you conclude (conclusion).

Checklist
•Introduction flows from general to specific ending with a thesis statement
•Paragraphs all have topic sentences
•Conclusion sums up (in different words) and doesn’t include new information

References
• Morley, J., (2005) Academic Phrasebook. Retrieved from :
http://www.phrasebank.manchester.ac.uk/introductions.htm
• Pinker, S. (2007) The Myth of Violence
Retrieved from:
http://www.ted.com/talks/lang/en/steve n_pinker_on_the_myth_of_violence.html