5. Последний абзац.
«Make a conclusion restating your position» — «Заключение».
Здесь нужно дать своё мнение, но другими словами, таким образом, заявив о нём ещё раз. Более профессионально высказать в заключении обобщение или сделать дополнительное наблюдение. Обязательно нужно стараться избегать повторения уже написанных фраз. Согласно спецификации контрольно-измерительных материалов ФИПИ 2014 г., «если более 30% ответа имеет непродуктивный характер (т.е. текстуально совпадает с опубликованным источником), то выставляется 0 баллов по критерию „Решение коммуникативной задачи“, и, соответственно, всё задание оценивается в 0 баллов». Поэтому не рекомендуется повторять слова в задании. Выразите свою главную мысль другими словами. Как это сделать?
В нашем случае это может звучать так:
«All in all, sports stars really deserve their huge incomes due to the uniqueness and social value of their achievements. Evidently, it is the feature of a market economy where famous personalities of sportsmen are in demand being used to promote goods».
Здесь мы охарактеризовали профессию спортсменов с точки зрения их ценности для общества, т.е. посмотрели на неё не со стороны самого спортсмена или его менеджера, а со стороны общества.
Другие фразы для написания заключения могут быть следующими:
«To conclude / sum up, / in conclusion…» — «В заключение…».
«All in all…» — «В общем и целом ...».
«All things considered…» — «Учитывая все вышесказанное…».
«Taking everything into account… / Taking all this into account / consideration…» — «Учитывая всё это...».
«…is a controversial issue, so it is up to a person whether to V1 or to V’1. Yet, I am convinced that…» — «…противоречивый вопрос, поэтому здесь должен решать лично каждый, (делать что-то или не делать). И всё-таки я убежден(а), что…».
«Although numerous skeptics frown on… our society need(s)…» — «Несмотря на то, что многочисленные скептики не одобряют… наше общество нуждается…».
«But to all who… I have only one response: we cannot afford to wait / ignore / neglect / disregard…» — «Но всем, кто… у меня один ответ: мы не можем позволить себе ждать / игнорировать / пренебрегать…».
Вот что в итоге у нас получилось:
«The world has often heard about million dollars’ prizes awarded to Olympic champions. At the same time there has been a dispute on whether athletes should receive such high salaries at all.
I personally favor high salaries in sports. Indeed, sportsmen dedicate their whole life to break records and win golden medals. Far from anyone could stand such heavy loads that professional athletes endure permanently. Secondly, being a professional sportsman is an art of its own, since only talent together with hard work can bring prominent results; and as outstanding persons, champions should be rewarded adequately. Moreover, high salaries are usually paid to sportsmen by private organizations or governments who expect to get even bigger benefits later. The athlete wins gold to the team attracting further investments into it, or advertises a company’s product.
A lot of people however think that athletes’ salaries are really overrated. Firstly, in their opinion, many sportsmen take doping. So their results may not reflect exceptional efforts. Secondly, opponents of high salaries in sport claim that there are occupations which are more important for our society, like scientists, for example, whose achievements help progress.
That may be true, but isn’t there doping control which is aimed at disqualifying cheating athletes? As for scientists, yes, they deserve high incomes for their inventions, but sportsmen, not less than scientists, devote all their free time to get outstanding results, sacrificing rest, health and private life.
All in all, fortunes are earned in sports unquestionably due to the uniqueness and social value of their achievements. Evidently, it is the feature of a market economy where famous personalities of sportsmen are used to promote goods».
Всего 275 слов.
Opinion Essay - 200-250 words (min 180/ max 275)
Essey Models
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a) Some people think that ___ . At the same time, others consider that ___ . b) Nowadays some people may hold the opinion that ___ . Others agree that ___ . c) Some people hold the idea that ___ . Others believe that ___ . d) Some people maintain the idea that ___ . Other people are of opinion that ___ . e) Some people hold the opinion that ___ . Others argue that ___ . f) Nowadays some people may hold the opinion that ___ . Others argue that ___ . g) Some people consider that ___ . Others claim that ___ . h) Some people might argue that ___ . Others believe that ___ . i) Some people maintain the idea that ___ . Others consider that ___ . j) Some people claim that ___ . yet others put forward the view that ___ . k) Nowadays some people may hold the idea that ___ . Some people warn that ___ . l) There is an opinion that ___ . While some people may claim that ___ . m) Nowadays some people believe that ___ . Others are sure that ___ . |
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a) I agree with the point of view that ___ . First of all, ___ . Besides, ___ . What is more, ___ . b) As far as I am concerned I believe that ___ . Firstly, ___ . Secondly, ___ . Thirdly, ___ . c) it seems to me that ___ . Firstly, ___ . Secondly, ___ . Thirdly, ___ . d) To my mind, ___ . My argument for this point of view are listed as follows. First of all, ___ . Besides, ___ . Furthermore, ___ . e) I do strongly support the idea that ___ . First of all, ___ . In addition, ___ . Moreover, ___ . f) As far as I am concerned, I agree that ___ . Firstly, ___ . Secondly, ___ . Thirdly, ___ . g) I believe that ___ . Here I would explain a few of the most important reasons. First of all, ___ . Additionally, ___ . Last but not least, ___ . h) I consider that ___ . First of all, ___ . Besides, ___ . What is more, ___ . i) I agree with the point of view that ___ . Firstly, ___ . Secondly, ___ . Thirdly, ___ . j) it seems to me that ___ . k) In my opinion, ___ . First of all, ___ . In addition, ___ . Finally, ___ . l) |
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a) Nevertheless, we can find a contrary opinion. Some people are sure that ____ . b) However, some people think that ___ . c) At the same time we can find another opinion. d) However, some people consider that ___ . e) At the same time, some people believe, ___ . f) Nevertheless, we can find a contrary opinion. According to it, ___ . g) At the same time, some people claim that ___ . h) Nevertheless, some peope disagree and they consider that ___ . i) However, some people think that ___ . j) Some people disagree because they are sure that ___ . k) Nevertheless, other people suppose that ___ . l) However, others disagree. They are sure that ___ . |
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a) However, I cannot agree with this opinion competely because ___ . b) To my mind, it is hard to accept that ___ . c) As for me, I'm not sure that it is true. I think that ___ . d) Persanally , I believe ___ . e) However, I cannot agree with this opinion competely. I am sure that ___ . f) Nevertheless, I feel ___ . g) However, I cannot agree with ths opinion competely because ___ . h) To be honest, there is little evidence for me to support the ___ that ___ . i) At the same time, I am sure that ___ . j) A the same time, I am unconvinced that ___ . k) However, it is hard to deny that ___ . l) Personally, I consider that ___ . |
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a) According to the arguments presented above, I can note ___ . b) All in all, ___ . c) In conclusion, I would like to stress that ___ . d) To conclude, I would like to note that ___ . e) As a conclusion, it is important to emphasize ___ . f) In conclusion, there is no doubt that ___ . g) To sum up, I would like to stress that ___ . h) According to the arguments presented above, it is important to pay attention to ___ . i) All in all, I want to note that ___ . j) We can draw a conclusion that ___ . k) All in all, it is important to mention that ___ . l) Based on the above discussion, I can conclude that ___ . |