Conclusion

In conclusion …

On the basis of the above information we come to the following conclusion …

I think / I believe …

In my opinion / To my mind …

It seems to me that …

As far as I am concerned …

Finally / To sum up …

Taking everything into account …

The main advantage (disadvantage) of this text is …

The best feature of this text is …

The only drawback I noticed is that …

I particularly enjoyed the second part, because …

I recommend this (well-written / topical) text (highly) to …

11.1. Choose five most important recommendations which you think will help you to improve your academic writing.

1. Write precisely: clearly and accurately.

2. Use correct language: grammar, vocabulary, spelling, etc.

3. Organise the writing carefully: introduction, main body, and conclusion.

4. Write legibly: handwriting should be easy to read.

5. Write in an academic style: without using colloquial language.

6. Avoid very long sentences.

7. Be rational, critical, honest and objective.

8. Carefully paragraph the writing.

9. Avoid too much repetition.

10. Check details carefully.

11. Ensure that the opening paragraph is not too long and that it creates a good impression.

12. Pay as much attention to the conclusion as to the introduction.

13. Avoid the use of jargon, propaganda, exaggeration, and emotive language.

14. Ensure that ideas and items are logically connected.

15. Finally add some advice of your own that is not covered in the list above.

11.2. Read the review below and answer the questions:

Which tenses are used?

What is the purpose of each paragraph?

What useful phrases are used in the review?

Is this a good example of the review or not? Give reasons.

Review

The title of the article I have just read is “Air Pollution”. It is published in a famous journal “National Geography” and once more proves the importance of the discussed topic.

The author begins the article with some historical background and then gives a detailed analysis of the problem of air pollution. The idea is not new, of course, but we must agree that it remains very topical nowadays. Generally speaking the article is organised into 6 parts. Part 1 recounts the history and gives some definitions, e.g. air pollution management and monitoring. Part 2 describes industrial processes causing pollution in such big cities as London and Tokyo. Part 3 clearly explains the sources of harmful emissions, mentioning industrial complexes, motor vehicles and power plants. Part 4 compares big cities, small towns and rural areas. Moreover it gives additional information about toxic and hazardous sources of pollution. I really enjoyed reading part 5 because it is a good bridge to the next part. Only 10 sentences long it presents impressive possibilities of antipollution measures. Unfortunately in the last section the author comes to a distressful conclusion: although millions of dollars are spent to reduce the amount of pollution emitted into the atmosphere, this battle is endless and often not very successful.

I personally believe that the main advantages of this article are the following: all problems are covered from many points of view and vivid examples are represented to support them. In addition to this it is well written from all standpoints: the content, topic, style and structure. That is why I heartily recommend this article for those who are doing ecology and geography – it will provide you with many things to think about.

11.3. And now read a similar review of the same article. This model is not a good one and your task is to explain why.

REVIEW

This article under the title “Air Pollution”, deals with one of the most essential problems of today. The article is divided into several paragraphs – each to describe the problem from different sides.

The author starts with the origin of the problem and the first steps taken to solve it. He mentions, that people did not consider air pollution as a problem a century ago, but nowadays almost everybody realizes it. Evidently to catch reader’s attention the author gives a comprehensive picture of a modern city. From my point of view this paragraph, the largest one, is the best one for its insight.

All in all the paper is clearly written and relatively easy to read. The only drawback I noticed is that it says nothing specific about the problem. A primary goal is a list of organisations concerned with the quality of urban air. The readership if this article intends to attract students and all the people who want to get general information about air pollution. The epilogue of this article, however, remains the question of air pollution open.

11.4. Are the statements true (T) or false (F)?

1. Reviews do not include the writer’s view point.

2. The present tense is usually used in the description.

3. Each new topic is introduced in a new paragraph.

4. Linking words should be included in your writing.

5. The last paragraph never summarises the article.

6. Always justify your point of view.

7. The heading of the article should always be mentioned.

8. Students always have some difficulties writing in English.

11.5. Which verbs are similar in meaning?

1. analyse a) show

2. characterise b) make clear

3. classify c) demonstrate

4. explain d) describe

5. express e) examine

6. list f) propose

7. illustrate g) arrange into groups

8. suggest h) mention things one after another

11.6. Fill in the gaps with the words from activity 11.5. Mind grammar tense.

1. The report …….. various ways of solving the problem.

2. In 1918 W. Köppen …….. climates in 5 categories.

3. Last year British scientists …….. samples of leaves taken from the sea.

4. To put pictures in a book means to …….. it.

5. At the end of the course paper the books are …….. alphabetically.

6. The author …….. his own opinions in his books.

7. Bright colours …….. his paintings.

8. Science cannot …….. everything.

11.7. Match the two parts of the sentences.

1. There is acid in that bottle, therefore	a) the icy road continuous.
2. The accident occurred because of	b) cold it is.
3. He passed his examinations because	c) they had to turn round.
4. Lots of factories closed down, thus	d) he worked hard.
5. She leaves all the windows open, however	e) everyone played well.
6. We lost the game although	f) many people lost their jobs.
7. A tree had fallen across the road, so	g) the rain.
8. We went out in spite of	h) it must be handled very carefully.

11.8. Fill in the words in bold. Remember that:

who / that – refers to people which / that – refers to things

where – is used for places

1. The article …….. I have just finished reading is very clearly written.

2. A professor is a person …….. works in a university.

3. The book …….. I finished last year has just been published.

4. A school is an institution …….. children are educated.

5. An encyclopaedia is a book …….. gives information on subjects.

6. There are a number of languages …….. are descended from Latin.

7. The difficulties …….. you have when writing in English may be in grammar and spelling.

8. A university is a place …….. students get higher education.

11.9. Match the words with their definitions.

1. survey	a) an article that gives opinion about something
2. essay	b) composition
3. review	c) an examination of something
4. dissertation	d) a list of questions
5. summary	e) a long piece of writing on a particular subject that do for a university degree.
6. questionnaire	f) a brief statement of some points

11.10. Read Ali’s essay. Then match the paragraphs A - I with these topics:

Conclusion / Crime and People’s Attitude / Environmental Problems / Introduction / Leisure Choices / Multicultural London / The Cost of Living / Famous Sights / Transport